Hey guys, me again ^^. This time I translated another futa doujinshi that was in limbo without translation. For those who don't know me, I'm Brazilian studying English / Mandarin and I'm translating some futa doujinshi CH-> EN just for hobby. So sorry if there is an error in the sentences in English.

Passable, kind of like that one "translator" who didn't actually understand Japanese and was creating "English translations." Manages to get the general idea, but misses all the fine details. Considering it's a translation of a translation and that neither the source nor target language are your first language, it's not unexpected. A solid "You Tried"/10.

But I love this doujinshi more than any other Yakitate Jamaica work, so I'll probably do a translation for this too. I don't have an editor though, so I'll just share it here and you can decide whether you want to use it or not.

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Thank god someone finally translated this. Even if the quality is a bit low I more than appreciate your work.

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Let the pregnancy war begin

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@Nomake Wan

I've been working on a direct JP to ENG translation of this book. I'm not a fluent Japanese speaker (yet), but I can understand something like a doujin just fine, and I don't use machine translation. I actually finished the translated script a while ago, but I haven't started the image editing / type-setting yet. This book is high on my priorities list, but I'm half way through a Slime Isekai book right now, and Aomushi's stuff is always a lot of work on the image editing (at least, it is if you work the standards I prefer to). Look forward to it, but don't hold your breath.

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Vlw primo, tu é foda

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At the very least, you should be using white to white out the bubbles. In this gallery, you've used a light grey. These raws could use some leveling, as well.

Nice to see Aomushi continuing to get attention, though.

edit: Ah, you're right. The leveling is fine. Must have gotten distracted after...cleanup.

Last edited on 08 April 2020, 05:34 UTC.

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These have already been properly levelled. They have a nice big peak right at each end of the scale. I'm not sure why he ended up paining the text bubbles grey. Just using a simple white brush should have worked fine.

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Me understand book, me no have problem.... JK, the english isnt my first language, but was a good work in the translation for me, thanks.

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