www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Tabula-Smaragdina

Could we get this in a readable font?

Base +6, Rinozi +6, incogna777 +6, Nickidk +3, nasty jack +7, soul saber +6, Chaos Diesel +6, Soldier A +6, flash73 +8, dacoolman +7, hawkloner +6

I kind of like the art and the setting. But you have to redo ALL OF THE TEXT. It is illegible. And you're wasting space in each panel. Generally you allot space for the words, and then you draw the art. This is a really good rough draft. But the font, style and the presentation of English has to be readable. This isn't and I can't strain my eyes to see if your story boarding and writing is passable. Which isn't so important if your art remains consistent and you release your work frequently.

Base +3, soul saber +6, Chaos Diesel +6, elrunethe2nd +7, Soldier A +6, flash73 +8, dacoolman +7, hawkloner +6, Braltewrakcus +10

https://twitter.com/TabulaSmaragdi1
https://www.instagram.com/tabulasutra_ig/

Base +57, sadikus +26

Great! More!

Base +7, sadikus +26, ExxxtraLewd -5

Thought it was Hitler from the thumbnail. Disappointed.

Base +6, dacoolman -7, dekamaster2 -7, Cybe +6, sadikus +28, Braltewrakcus -10, Kiranta -6

@MagicalJuko

I am glad I am not the only one who thought the guy in the thumbnail was Hitler. It looked like that space between the guy's nose and lips is a moustache.

Base +11

@jc1 It seriously threw me for a loop, lol. Was wondering what the heck it was about.

Base +6