It looks like it's almost there in places, but this artist needs more practice. It's better than what a regular non-artist would produce, but to make porn, you really gotta have very high-level skills in anatomy; hands should not be the death of you as they are for most people and you gotta get your ellipses, the bane of artists, down if you're gonna draw lips this way.
It doesn't need to be super realistic or whatever, at least not to me, but even weird little Western toon-ish sstyle stuff takes a lot of practice.

Also, for me as a... uh... fapper, I felt like it could use a few less sexual references/puns; not every single speech bubble needs to have a sexual reference but I also know it's supposed to be a silly porn thing and really what would be more important to me is getting the art down.

Of course,I would definitely keep the vaginas as ovens thing since thinking about warm pussy was the one thing that actually got me off as I was, for some reason, trying to jerk to this.

All in all, the artist just needs to draw more and get to a level where the art throughout is at least as good as the cover. But that's just me.

Last edited on 26 February 2020, 21:51 UTC.

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Wow, what year is it? I haven't read this in a long time, It must have been over ten years ago.

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