Not sure which to do more, feel bad for the sap or keep laughing.

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Where is this thing going?! XD

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I love that reference to Popeye at page 13 :D

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Hah. Ok, Count me in.

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Note to self: Someone who expects to be able to defeat a dragon as a human might just be rather overpowering as a dragoness.

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Just a touch.

Though I do find a certain amusement that the stereotypical "I'm a girl, fuck me harder" trope here ends up very, very, very badly for the dragon behind it. Do wonder what the green dragoness is up to with all those kids she loves and their "Not the mama" response.

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This is terrible and I love it. *grab a second bowl of popcorn*

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I have no clue what the fuck is going on here but I still read the whole thing

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Normally, one can either expect to find porn, or comedy. Rarely can the two cross over with any true decency. But this, this manages both with true aplomb!

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Laughing too hard to fap.

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LOL! The popcorn was a nice touch. XD

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No one can beat mom XD

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Why is this so...relatable?

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Upon seeing the first couple of panels, I did not expect this to be so funny. I was wrong.

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Domestic Goddess lvl 10? Huh, and who says stay at home moms lack ambition?

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is that a fucking jojo reference

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First page: Eugh TF, not my thing

Much later: Eh let's see whats the deal with this...

AAAAHAHAHAHEHEHEHAHAHAEHHEHE

5/5 waitin for more

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The way the panel layout on page 25 shakes out is pretty neat-
Your eyes scan left-right, then follow the beam right-left and down, then continue left-right along the next line.

The only problem is that there are too many small panels; could’ve easily condensed some of the scene, such as making the toss and the landing one panel, then continuing the transformation in a series of nested panels from there.

Same could be said for a lot of the pages in this comic. The artist needs to condense their scenes a bit more, or else the pages turn into a crowded mess. That said, there are a lot of very good ideas for tracking and motion in the layout here.

Artist, if you’re reading this, here are some resources to look over if you want to improve your layouts a bit-
https://www.makingcomics.com/2014/05/07/panel-layout-golden-ratio/
https://kotaku.com/the-genius-of-the-dragon-ball-manga-1578356576

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Not gonna lie, was amused by the subversion of having the transformee ending up dominating the transformer.

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That's how mafia works!!!

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Well this is a wild fucking ride.

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This is gold XD

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This continues to be hilarious.

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so anyone else scared after they realized they just had 1,012,018 children on their first try each of these children could grow into a giant 100 times the size of a human

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I have an feeling that the yellow one has an ex somewhere and that this is history repeating itself.

Base +16, Atroticus +7, Konmuri +7

Errr... where'd purple come from?

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@zanead from a 7-page short:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/30751919/

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that Magic Cards lol

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I never laughed and WTFed so hard reading a comic

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poor yellow lol

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This is the type of hentai that people would fap and laugh at the same time

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T R A I T O R O U S T H R O B

Never did I imagine I'd see those words together.

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so Red is the only remaining "male"
(but still has ditsy female brain?)

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I can't count the number of places we've gone at this point, and every single one has been surreal.

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Page 44: NANI?!

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I SEE JOJO

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p46：dio里dio气的

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Page 46. was that a mother FUCKING JOJO REFERENCE !?!?!?!?!?!?!

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pg:46
OHO! mukatte kuro no ka

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This isn't hitting many of my kinks anymore...but it's just HILARIOUS.

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Well it took red only 25 pages to realise she was male...

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@graysock 27, if you count the page where she got TFTG'd. lol

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And then, suddenly...
DAB!!!

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I was genuinely more interested in the humor than the porn, it was that funny.

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And in the last page we saw the enlarged family in all their roles.
Suprisingly, Red become teacher mom, becasue if she let this to the others the kid would end up barbaric
Green and Yellow had reached an agreement of sort, with Yellow becoming "mid" mom. Some of the elder hatchlings have now grown in teenage(and one is a goth girl)
Pink is party mom, entertaining the masses with her little assistant(awwww)
Purple prove to be the chef and enough cool dad to earn some respect from the kids, at least some of the older ones...
And blueee.....yeaaaahhh seem to have accepted his fate....
A joyful happy family

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So...much...meme.

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Got another page up on FA, glad everyone loves this silliness.

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35372346/

Also, I plan on keeping this comic going till at least 100 pages, so it ain't ending anytime soon!

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@Engy GS
You are a saint!

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This is ludicrous and I'm here for it. :D

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OK now it's just getting silly.

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I absolutely love this its wonderfully whimsical

And I would totally walk into that cave.

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