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so good! to bad we didn't get a real shot of her drinking the semen from lily's ass, would have been the cherry on top
Base +7
Posted on 30 April 2020, 15:25 UTC by: VNProtagonist
Score +7
A few things: Pg 8, bottom left panel, should be "meet" instead of "met." Introduction pg, last sentence of the first paragraph sounds like it's missing something. There's a weird floating line towards the end in the afterword of the author's monologue. And the biggest mistake, her name is "Yusa" not "Yuki" as shown by the hiragana in the raw.
Overall, pretty good for a first release. Thanks for sharing.
we weren't still using "trap" to refer to trans women like this… the japanese uses 男の娘, which is a bit of a dated term regardless, but it's pretty unambiguous that this character would refer to herself as a trans girl under similar circumstances in english-speaking culture seeing characters described using slurs in translations like this is really uncomfortable and puts a damper on what would otherwise be some pretty decent representation.
Base +8, X9X8X7 -6
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