My first scanlation
Thanks to
hungryhobo for the TL script (https://forums.ehentaihip.com/index.php?showtopic=233896&hl=)
ongokakashi for corrections
and
Google translate for additional translations

Page 21's text made no sense when I ran it through Google TL

Text cleaned soon
(Reupload cause of minor errors that I didn't notice)

Raw: /g/1112866/4987a89c13/
Spanish TR: /g/1134328/50395a09da/
Chinese TR: /g/1232762/a9a5fd57f2/

Thanks for this translation! Wonderful boobs!!

Base +43, Dnkz +23

Hey, great work with the typesetting, I appreciate the effort!

I tried getting the translation out there but many people considered secondary translations to be unacceptable or that it would tarnish the original meaning of the doujin. I feel atleast having an english translation better to not having one.

so thank you for picking this up!

Base +6, Dnkz +23, pulsar577 +9

Thanks for seeing this

Base +6

This was the digital version? The image quality is pretty bad.

Base +11

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The typesetting is not bad for a first one (we have seen much worse here) but it could use a bit of polishing.
Sometimes you leave short words alone on one line even if you don't have e.g. on page 6 bottom left panel let meI quote Bob Ross:"Everybody needs a friend").
If you have trouble fitting the text inside of bubbles or too many shorter words end up being alone on one line, reduce the overall fontsize a bit.
And differntiate between thought/narration by setting your font to italic or if you want to be real fancy choosing a different font.

Base +16, darkdepths +16, Dynellen +49

I see, thank you Ancient-Alien.

How bad can type setting get from here anyway?

Base +6