Author: "(Here it is! The start of the reboot!

How would you react to being paired up with a hot older woman you’ve never met before? Would you dive in headfirst, be a little cautious, or resist such a cruel fate?)"

Pre-Reboot Story - /g/1402482/bfccfab641/

soo... is the original done or is this just a alternative telling of the story

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Viktor0nk, in Romania, we have a saying: The old chicken and the young carrot make the best soup. So, to answer your question, I would probably diven in, both headsfrst.

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Wait...What's going on here? And Cheryl's 37? That sounds...not right. In fact, she looks more like her mother here.

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The original comic lost its way and the artist got bored. So they killed it and rebooting the story.

Same cast with some edits. Different story.

Same Patrons fueling the comic

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Must say I am sad the original comic is over. Though the new art style is not to my liking I still found the story quite interesting.

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Aww, i liked old Cheryl better.

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Maybe X-TC will get the devotion she deserves this time around

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Artist could have at least finished the chapter before rebooting. Or at least finished a "don't leave it in a cliffhanger midd-fight" page before rebooting. You know, just so NOT being a dick. I understand desire to reboot if the storyline was going nowhere, but that was kind of rude towards the readers

Last edited on 13 May 2019, 22:39 UTC.

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So Jameson's not an Incubus anymore? That's quite disappointing, but I'm glad Aya is back.

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I am sorry but this isnt deviants for me any more

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The patreons seem like cucks for paying this guy to make a comic, and then just bending over and accepting it when he suddenly wakes up one day and wants to nuke the whole thing in favor of a reboot.

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Well, to be honest, patreons probably don't care about story this much, as long as there's porn.

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@God Revan: The authors are atists, but they are also assholes. You wanna reboot a story? Go ahead. Marvel and DC have done that so many times I lost count. You CAN do it. But if you do it in the middle o a story arc, even more, in the middle of a fight scene, whithout even a "sending off" page to give closure to the readers, THAT is being rude. Even worst, needlessly rude. The readers sometimes think they deserve more than they do, but the reverse (authors thinking the readers don't deserve anything) is also false: EVERYBODY deserves common courtesy, readers and authors alike.

And no, "the author is disilusioned with the old story" doesn't cut it - because doing a send-off page does count as starting a new tale PROPERLY (been there, done that) and even a single-panel with a wall of text would have sufficed.

Last edited on 20 May 2019, 09:44 UTC.

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This would have been better off as its own, self-contained story instead of a reboot.

And @God Revan, really, you're just making things worse.

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Fam if we dont respect the artist in any way shape or form and grow a collective hate from the free piracy site, More NSFW artists are going to hide behind patreon and become bigger hardasses.

Shit I've seen good artists quit because they come here and see the hate while their patrons suck his dick raw since their financial entitlement gets in the way of actual input.

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Yoo. I'm enjoying how Jameson is acting. He's literally all of us when we've felt embarrassed when someone talked how "sexy" our moms were. LOL

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You Know I’m just glad that the art style is back

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In comparison with the original, I think this version of Cheryl is much better. I kinda like the "MILF" design of her plus she has those hips and bust to get hungry for.

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Holy shit! This is REALLY awesome!
Can't wait for more!

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They should've made this Cheryl's mother instead.

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Aya actually gave Cheryl a bush and it's rather well detailed. I, myself, prefer my girls perfectly clean or shaven but this is a good change.

Pg. 13- That countdown better not be for what I think it is.

Last edited on 26 July 2019, 07:07 UTC.

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The art is a bit of an step backwards, in my opinion.

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cheryl简直骚断题

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Why did you reboot it? I like the first version :'( :"(

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Go look at the end of the other version, They switched artists to an amateur and the writing went off the rails.@Omasu

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Jameson is lowkey a grownup Pico with a big cock

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I miss the fact that the main character was an incubus, but love all the new stuff in this version

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Writer here, for those wondering why it got rebooted, there were a number of factors as to why it was ended in such a way and I understand why people would get mad at it. I've listed the reasons below but overall I just couldn't keep it going. It just wasn't healthy for me to continue. But I'm happy with this comic. I'm no longer spending half of my paychecks covering costs like I used to do. I no longer have that luxury so I do what I can with the help of those on Patreon and Gumroad. I can't do anymore than that no matter how badly I want to.

Why did I reboot Deviants?
1. No passion. I have been wanting to start over for a long, long time. I can change the direction of the comic but I didn't like the foundation for it. So to me the story would never be to my liking. The sense of closure you'd get from any kind of ending would be incomplete, hollow, and insincere.
2. Patreon changed what was allowed on its platform. That changed the story and forced me to remove content that they didn't approve of.
3. That happened a few years ago and the majority of support for Sexyverse came from the cut content and when that was removed, support dropped drastically. Turns out many patrons were interested in another comic that could no longer be on the platform. That was not a good realization for me.
4. The comic is reliant on financial support, with me paying for over half of the costs myself for over three years. I commission artists to put art to my script and every month I had hoped that I wouldn't be spending half of my paycheck on it. After a while I've had to cut back on content because I couldn't afford it anymore.
5. Sexyverse Games was a side project that grew incredibly fast and proved to be more popular and time consuming. After a while I started seeing continuous growth while Sexyverse Comics continued to decline.
6. That led to me getting a new artist for the comic while putting the comic's original artist to work on our games. Long before that happened Deviants was already dropped to updating once a week and any other comic was cancelled. Reminder that the comic was consistently in decline over the past few years.
7. It got to the point where I had to change back to the original artist and was faced with the perfect time to reboot the comic. Switching artists and then later rebooting the comic would have doubled the whiplash. I know people wanted a satisfying conclusion but it would not have been good.
8. I knew it would rub some people the wrong way but I wanted to start the reboot as soon as possible.

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I'm liking the new Lisa design. Her look actually matches up with how demeanor and attitude were in the original one.

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Alright, finished reading the original and now this story makes more sense. I dunno what was wrong with the old one, but whatever.

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Not gonna lie would love to see some sexy incest with the mom and sister in here as well.

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ah，that's good

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I can't help but think about what Jameson's reaction will be when he finally meets Lisa and she talks about how she had "fun" with his mom.

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YOOOOOOOO! JAAAAAMIIIIIEE!!!!

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I'm glad the artist is back, but this story is just boring now.

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These Incest-inuendos and Jameson's reactions are literally fucking hilarious. I can't stop laughing. XD

Like, fuck! Jamie FTW! She's making this chapter full of WIN!

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Personally, I loved the old story. It was much more enjoyable imo. The new one is not interesting to me because it takes the same characters and rewrites the entire thing while changing the characters around. Characters that I grew to know from the first story. With this reboot, it's now very jarring.

Imagine this: Take The Justice League. Now, rewrite it so they're just civilians who are doing things somewhat similar. They fight crime, but as normal people except like 2 people who have powers. Their personalities are mostly intact, but it's just normal crime fighting. Sure, "Superman" is in it, but it's really some normal dude named Clark Kent who happens to be a regional power lifting multiple time champ who can knock the snot out of most people in one hit. He only has the name "Superman" because he's so strong. That's what this reboot did to me.

On the flipside, if I had never read the original I'd never be in this situation where I am now. I'd actually not be reading it at all as my filters only hit this for tomgirl (to which there's no instance of whatsoever). If I DID read this it would be an interesting read for a bit, but that would be it. Story isn't super interesting, world isn't explained, no backstory on anything.. It's a very "cum and leave" kinda story.

All in all, I think the story itself for me is spoiled by the original story and reusing the characters and rewriting them too. Excluding this, story is bland as it's literally a "fuck my son he needs help" and "meet and fuck" (not saying the original wasn't very meet and fuck, but there was a whole story in it). There's been nothing engaging on this so I'm giving it a hard pass. I'll check back in once in a while to see if it gets any better but likely not since this is the direction the writer wanted it to go from the start anyway. Nothing wrong with that, just not my thing.

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I don't approve of NTR, but cockblocking your brother deserves some kind of punishment.

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Holy....fucking....shit! Kennedy looking sooo much better in this new drawing style than the original!

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The Amazon is also part horse.

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Jamie & Kennedy as a thing? Hmmm, I could get behind it.

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Yeah, this is...definitely boring. What was stopping Aya from picking up the old comic where it left off?

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the diversity is nice but i'd still like an ending to the first one

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Deviants page 54

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我tm社保，，，

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@Tess Verres I agree with what you are saying but you really should have picked a better analogy. Comicbooks get "rewritten" all the time. That is why there are many different variations of the same characters.

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The story in this version is, frankly, inferior. The problem isn't the writing; the problem is that, fundamentally, all ideas have a certain amount of potential. For instance, Batman is a more interesting character than Superman Why? Because there's just less you can do with Supes. His power is to have all the powers, but that's kind of the problem. He's too powerful, his lack of limitations places a cap on how engaged we can be, because, at the end of the day, we never really doubt Superman is going to win, and he's probably going to win by punching something really hard.

Batman, on the other hand, is just- a guy, he' just a guy. He's rich, and well equipped, smart and highly trained. But at the end of the day, when he fights Bane, he gets his back broken and has to go through months of intensive physical therapy. Which- is just not a story you can tell with Superman. Ironically, because Batman is less powerful than Superman, you're able to tell a wider array of stories with him. But you know how's even more interesting than Batman? Nightwing, who is who just Batman, but slightly worse.

The same concept applies to concepts for stories. So, what have we done, well, we had a story about a unique individual, an incubus in a world where incubi are supposed to be extinct, there's a mystery, our protagonist is an aberration, how did he come about? Incubi didn't just go extinct, they were hunted to extinction because they're dangerous, there's conflict, people are going to want to control, or hurt him because of what he is.

Now, the story is about a normal human whose mother is a pimp. Also a gigolo I guess.

I struggle to come up with an apt comparison. But I guess it'd be kind of like if you took Baccano! Or like, JoJo or something, and rebooted it, but the reboot is The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. Like, I enjoy slice of life, but that would be a downgrade, no one would be happy with this, and they would be correct to be unhappy with it.

I can appreciate not wanting to continue a project, I am a novelist, it happens. I can understand abandoning a project, though I find doing so when you are releasing said project for public consumption to be questionable. What I cannot honestly comprehend is taking a project that you are publishing for public consumption, abandoning it, and spinning it off into a structurally inferior story using the same characters.

I just, don't get it.

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"It's thicker than my brother's!"
Roll Tide!

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