I have a favorites folder for the best of the best for corruption. Shinra, g9, etc are in there. This goes in there with no hesitation. An absolute MASTERPIECE for a first work too. Definite room for improvement as all first tries have, but small. You did a great job capturing what makes corruption great. If this is what you set the bar at for a first try...Yeah, I’m excited to see what you’ve got in store!