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That was fantastic.

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I would have loved a couple more pages with her in "broken" state but overall it's great.

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Isn't that kind of a shitty quirk?

"I can shoot flames from my hands!"

"I can fully control anybody that answers when I talk to them!"

"Oh yeah? Well give me a crew, a specialised facility, a support telepath, and a rape victim and I can break her! Only takes a few weeks!"

Last edited on 16 May 2020, 03:58 UTC.

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If it's a permanent brainwashing, it might be shitty but the result is good.

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Well holy shit, the translation actually made the mind break worse. There isn't any buildup or progression, it isn't the result of all her slave training, it's just brought up at the very end, completely out of nowhere. "Hey guess what, I can brainwash people, boop you're dead." The end. You don't get more tacked-on than that.
God damn. The translation itself is good, really impressed with the editing, but just...god damn.

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Thanks, I like the story in general... but the ending was... meh

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I mean considering how strong quirks are pushed and trained at UA, this guy's quirk would be insane if he was a student there, and he got through all the training. probably be like "control people at a touch" or some shit.

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im not trying to be a cant or anything

but can u make it one page per page?

bcos reading this in landscape is hard

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I find it story breaking that no one was looking for her. like at all. The teachers have shown they are fiercely protective of their students and the class are all fire forged friends, so her missing for weeks sounds really stupid narrativly speaking.

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Would have been 10/10 mindbreak without the brainwashing.

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dunnoi could understand the brainwashing rtype of mind control, that only works if the ego of that person is broken, in that regard all the emotional torment she goes through makes sense.

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Kinda lame that they made an almost 50 page comic and waited until the last 8 pages to finally break her down and only the last page shows her truly and fully broken.

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Personally, this is my speed. I hate it when they get mind broken halfway in and then just love to have sex, her fighting the whole time, and even then it taking identity death to make her happily go along with it is right up my ally.

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I wish the heroes would win one of these every now and again, like the heroes bust in at the nick of time and ochako returns to a normal life. Might be a good twist

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this is how every BnHA doujin should go

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