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Oh, seriously? Only Ochako's books will be translated?

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That was fantastic.

Base +6, 无名的哲学姬 -3

I would have loved a couple more pages with her in "broken" state but overall it's great.

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Isn't that kind of a shitty quirk?

"I can shoot flames from my hands!"

"I can fully control anybody that answers when I talk to them!"

"Oh yeah? Well give me a crew, a specialised facility, a support telepath, and a rape victim and I can break her! Only takes a few weeks!"

Last edited on 16 May 2020, 03:58 UTC.

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If it's a permanent brainwashing, it might be shitty but the result is good.

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Well holy shit, the translation actually made the mind break worse. There isn't any buildup or progression, it isn't the result of all her slave training, it's just brought up at the very end, completely out of nowhere. "Hey guess what, I can brainwash people, boop you're dead." The end. You don't get more tacked-on than that.
God damn. The translation itself is good, really impressed with the editing, but just...god damn.

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Thanks, I like the story in general... but the ending was... meh

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I mean considering how strong quirks are pushed and trained at UA, this guy's quirk would be insane if he was a student there, and he got through all the training. probably be like "control people at a touch" or some shit.

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