PLEASE READ:
Ok, the whole file was edited.

It seems a change in txt -/ rtf format produced a bug and created Cubes(?) to the script file, so that's why this whole situation happened

Still, my bad, yeah I know I have bad grammar, and that's exactly why I didn't translate without some native speakers anymore

Anyway I thank @LookAtYrOwnName.
to @Faeldrin
his suggestion about ルイーザ (ruiiza) and ルイズ (ruizu) and to use "Louise" was on point, sorry, no idea what came to my mind to call her "Luisa"
To @Dariusdd

Sorry, everyone.

Raw:
/g/1642922/451aaa7e41/

Commission by Painn

Worth the commission. Thanks for doing it

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I really love this artist, all their works are strangely wholesome in a way most doujins aren't. Even the fat faceless old man isn't disgusting here, but just a cool dude.

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The thiccness of this girl is going to be the death of me.

Last edited on 31 May 2020, 01:55 UTC.

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Daddy issues have never been so erotic.

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What a heartwarming story. Faceless ojisan is my hero.

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Faceless ojisan 4 president.

Last edited on 25 May 2020, 15:24 UTC.

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Page 44
That is an abstract feel if ever I saw one.

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@smallestmoist
wow, right, I'm changing them, I don't mind to edit it, but... easy there, please. Don't be so angry

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Did this come from the future? Why does the date of publication on page 45 say October 23, 2020?

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@smallestmoist you know no one is forcing you to read this. You rude as hell.

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Is the torrent the latest version? Why is the filesize different?

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@fobboy Perhaps it was meant to be physically released for a future event but the author decided to release it digitally early.

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Page 27. Put a motherfucking ring on her.

Last edited on 25 May 2020, 15:00 UTC.

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Kurosu is ever diligent in their quest to answer the question, "Can you be too thicc?"

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Its was really a sentimental plot until I read bottom of the panel. I guess thats hentai for you.

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Oh right. 2000's was 2 decades ago

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ok, guys, I talked to the proofreader, something happened with the original file, so that's why part of the proofread and my original script are mixed, so if you can wait a little (actually it's quite late), I'll change the file.
Sorry

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It's not like I'm cumming, I'm just having cramps you brute.

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I really like this series. There's not that many works that you actually root for the gigolo dilf. It looks like this is the last one though, they didn't introduce a new character at the end or anything.
Thanks for your work.
Couple of grammar and tense errors.
page 11, last panel should be "That's not true... I didn't cum!!"
page 13, should be "Then, if you'll excuse me"
Page 16 "... I dihdn't [cum]..."
Page 17 "If you accept your loss"
page 19, "I didn't cum!" and "I'll do it even harder...!"
page 20, "What a pathetic face..."
page 26, "Like she's more amicable and gentle..." and "she would already be telling her off."
page 28, "But if she wishes for that"
page 30, "I drank all your semen..." and "I wouldn't expect any less from my little girl..."
page 31, "Look how wet your pussy is." and "You're really a perverted girl, Luisa." and "Caress my perverted groin, papaaa."
page 39, "After cumming, I felt pleasure and the regret from getting carried away."
page 43, "especially a father figure," and "...but is that kind of academy/ really worth protecting...?"
page 44, "with those nasty influential people's semen and girls' tears."

Last edited on 25 May 2020, 08:02 UTC.

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@LookAtYrOwnName
Oh god I hate myself so much right now

thanks, I'll be sure to change it asap.

Guys, again, I'm so sorry u.u

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For anyone who was wondering, like me, what's the spoken difference between "Louisa" and "Luisa":
Actually, the original Japanese gives ルイーザ (ruiiza) and ルイズ (ruizu), so in fact switching between "Louisa/Luisa" and "Louise" would probably be more correct, IMO. As it is, I thought it was just a spelling mistake the first few times.

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Why do I search for weight gain to find this?

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"Even if I sell my body I won't sell my heart"

Blessed ojisan with dem heroine lines. Best Girl. BEST GIRL

10-11 Instant Loss lol

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This artist's girl are getting thicker every release

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This is what Rick James was talking about when he said "She's a brick house".

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hi, I tried to read this, so here's what I noticed was wrong:

02 > "She look like a beautiful..." looks
04 > is it Louise or Luisa? as well as who did she get a perfect score? that doesn't make sense
05 > "to a trip" is supposed to be "on a trip", the 2nd bubble from the panel is not phrased as a question, but as a statement; 3rd panel: are you sure it should have been "the giant company"? it doesn't sound right; 4th panel: should've been "only by stupid men" instead; 5th panel: "trash that only THINK about" etc, wrong tense was used here
06 > we're back to Louisa? Which is the right one again
10 > should've been "not that big of a deal"
11 > cum? come? however you prefer I guess, but most certainly not "came" in that last panel
13 > "so different from a Japane girl's" I assume, it sounds off otherwise

at this point I started playing arknights, it's pretty tiring to check everything actually

15 > "High"? I believe that's meant as some sort of moan though, isn't it?
16 > maybe her slurred voice shouldn't have been in the wrong tense, instead of "came" it should've been come
17 > loss
19 > "say" instead of "said" in the slurred bubble, "come" instead of "came" in the 2nd panel and, the worst of all, you simply can't say "more harder"

I lost all will, I will just point out the mistakes, please give them another look

20 > "I could ended up cumming"; "what pathetic face",
21 > "why does this feels"
23 > "don't thrust in me so deep"
26 > "more amicably and gentle"; "she would already telling her off and sending her to"
28 > I guess I understand now why it's Luisa, eh? also: "but if she wish that, I'm going to give my all"
30 > "I think it would have"; "I drink all your semen"
31 > "You're really a pervert girl, Luisa"; "caress my pervert groin"
39 > "I felt a regret of" the entire damn box
43 > "is really worth protecting"

I most certainly missed some things here and there, please crosscheck with the other suggestions in the comments.

have fun!

EDIT: oof, just noticed it's a commission, what a screw up. How did the commissioner feel about this mess? Should you really release stuff this half-cooked?

Last edited on 25 May 2020, 19:18 UTC.

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It's really so much better when everyone is just a pervert and are genuinely enjoying the sex.

No rape, No blackmail, no NTR bullshit.

Just perverts being perverts.

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Diamond in the rough Oji-sans like this are why I can't risk filtering the bbm and dilf tags.

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May the cosmos bless you~~

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@Dariusdd I personally don't care. This was a rush job and I should've told him to take his time if I knew this type of backlash was going to happen. I don't mind the mistakes because he tried his best. Some of these people in here are just being rude and disrespectful.

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Something truly sexy about defeating a dignified ojo-sama...
This guy is truly a man among men...
Thanks for the awesome translation/upload

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Dude must be using echo location considering he has no eyes.

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I really appreciate how nice this faceless old man is.

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Always nice to see a BBM that isn't an ugly bastard, I'd love to see the others in this series scanlated some day!

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@coffeedrug
Don't quit just because you goofed, you big crybaby. You need to own your mistakes, learn from them, and move forward. If you really try, people will recognize your effort.

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@Ingryo
wow, again, crybaby? loool Ok, ok.
I'm aware of my mistakes and flaws, that's why I asked for help

So the only mistake I committed here was to not have QC.

And I always try

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Girl with daddy issues? I'm all for!

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@Coffeedrug
I know you do fine work, that's why I said what I did. What you said in the OP seemed like you overreacting, and I'd rather not see someone lose heart and stop because of something like this.

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It must be nice being a old man prostitute in hentai, no female can resist your big old man dick.

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Why are people bitching so much about this ? I mean, isn't like he is always making mistakes, take a look at his others works. Everyone make mistakes, you dont need to be rude, a least, he is trying to fix it.
@Coffedrug Thank you for your effort, don't worry, it's ok, you are human after all, i hope you dont quit just for this, but is ok if you do, i will always be gratefull for your works, thank you very much for everything!

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I knew this work was going to be amazing, based on the girl . I was not disappointed. The artist always makes the girls thick and delicious.

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Thanks for commissioning this, it was fantastic! So glad we didn't have to wait months for it like with the previous part.
It was pretty much as I expected from the raws, just that she didn't fall instantly like I thought and turned it into a contest of pride. Still, that switch from p10-11 where she want from confident and condescending to cutting straight to them in the act with her completely overwhelmed was quite hot.
Looks like we also have some drama coming up based on the end there. May be something unpleasant going on? Maybe the people behind the school use the whole male prostitute system to collect blackmail material on the students or something? Well, we're definitely due another part.

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I feel like this series can continue for a long time.

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Woah this is pretty good. I like these kinds of chad looking male characters that isn't the usual stereotypical asshole

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As a man who loves loli to milfs - page 27 turned GODLIKE for me

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Good lord. I wasn't sold on the first girl, and I liked the second well enough, but dear god this girl is fucking perfect.

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