I LOVE Minority works! his Honey Drops is one of my all time favorite! it had plot! lovable MC! slutty Tsundere that you just love! Funny jokes! Funny Twists! GREAT ART! Amazing finale! all around 10000/10!
On the other hand, I really thought the first story here was a 1 chapter story, the plot is just bad and doesn't hold up for this many chapters.. the second story was very similar to Honey Drops and had potential.. I feel Minority's specialty is in a one long story with lovable MC and slutty brat that is actually a huge masochist (but should have many bits of tsun/sadist moments throughout)! I wish to see him do another Honey Drops kind of story, it's the best!
Though I really appreciate the great work behind this work too!