work#2 Please give feedback on my translation and editing :)
Teacher Teacher: you are here Teacher Teacher 2: (wip) Teacher Teacher 3: (wip) Teacher Teacher 4: /g/1617935/0c9d3b3105/ by Doujins.com Teacher Teacher 5: /g/1662426/aeb2f5cb16/ by me
Editing is good. Translation is readable but you can improve on it (check p10, p12). I hope someone can give more details since I'm on mobile and my lazy ass ain't typing everything out.