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Can' t wait to see what happens next

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An alternative universe where Toriyama stopped giving Goku handjobs and let Gohan remain in the spotlight.

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Strongest saiyan; so I guess this assumes Super never happened

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@hjerry: More in line with that MikinTodo said. If they're giving Gohan credit for beating Buu, that not only excludes Super, it assumes Gohan actually got the job done in Z without dead people needing to be revived. Also it could be that this Gohan isn't aging normally: Bra refers to him like he's an equal, rather than the man old enough to be her father that he should be.

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I might be wrong about this but I'm almost certain there's some sort of tracing going on here, with scenes from the artist Youhei-dan Shinga doing his Naruto work.

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Nah it's not just you. I noticed this dude traced over some of yamamotos dragon ball doujin artwork as well in his previous work. Untalented wierdos always do that shit

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@IonGiveAf. First of all, I don't trace. I draw it free hand using references, sometimes straight off my phone when I'm working on a board. I mix and mash traits, sometimes for practice, other times for fun. "Imitation is the greatest form of flattery." I enjoy Yamamoto's and Yohei-dan's work, but I wouldn't think of tracing. That goes against my code. If you're gonna critique work, try not to insult the artist who is fine with displaying some of his work publicly.

@sadikus. Second of all, I don't really appreciate having two separate comics thrown up onto a single post. I don't mind this being here, but please remove pages 4 to 9.

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