TL is from the Rook_Bartly release. There were a few grammatical things I tried to fix, if it strayed too far from the JP TL please let me know, I don’t know JP and just did what I could with what I had. SFX translations were just me checking a list of manga sound effects and approximating from there, if I couldn’t find a TL I left it alone.

The biggest breaks from the original language I am aware of are that I added “world-famous” to the first page because in JP it’s a haiku and I wanted to preserve that, I couldn’t find a translation for the katakana for "rub" on page 11, so I just put in another pussy SFX, and the effects-heavy speech bubble on page 12 I translated from the Russian scans because that line wasn’t translated in the ENG scans - and I trust RU->ENG Google Translate more than I do JP->ENG Google Translate. Please understand.

katakana for *what i replaced with* "rub," fuck

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wow that last page is something else.

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If only it was this easy.

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Typesetting was actually really well done for a first-timer, though there are some bubbles where the text is not centered vertically.

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good story but little creepy, like life hack

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isnt this already posted?

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So, wait, did he kill hir at the end? If so, what a waste of fresh pussy.

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don't trust anyone, not even yourself.png

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So what happened to the real alice?

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this is pristine for a first time typesetting! :)

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@huy200072 It was already translated by somebody else, but the typesetting and cleaning (it's inexplicably about half the size of the raws, with a gigantic white border around it) in that release made me cry so I wanted to see if I could do it any better.

Last edited on 22 July 2020, 19:25 UTC.

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Now I want to hack accounts. Totally worth

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@Hugepervonline the real alice was probably some random female evil god going incognito to vacation on earth, but her vacation period was close to end, she was too lazy to brainwash the world to forget/ignore her existence, and a well-time hack happened, so she exploited it, for the greater good of humanity.

(For some definition of probably)

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Mind break, eh?

What's the fucking point of all this then, if he doesn't remember who he was and what he did?

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