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Commissioned by CruelTax

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Re-trasnslation of the first chapter because I had the whole book commissioned to me. Will be updating this gallery with new ones.

YES!!!!!!!!

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Wait a damn moment. There was a sequel for this? YES!!!!!

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Old man uses a flip phone, he must be really old.

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This artist is a pure genius... Takes talent to put in a good laugh with arousal....
Menea The Dog does not disappoint
Thanks for the retranslation... I can't wait for the sequel now...

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So this is where that face came from

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@DJjames; Is it so hard to read the uploader comment? "Re-trasnslation of the first chapter because I had the whole book commissioned to me. Will be updating this gallery with new ones." It's right there. The first chapter was translated 5 years ago, but none of the following ones. It was also the magazine scan. Not that surprising new translator who had the whole tank commissioned decided to do it anyway with the tank raws.

Thanks for translating/commissioning. This artist does very interesting expressions.

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Weeeeeeee! Love it!
Thanks a bunch RogMan and CruelTax!
Her face on page 7 - just amazing!

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Bruh this is a reaction image gold mine

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Am I crazy or is this a reference to Junji Itou?

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Well, that's what tends to happen when you seriously underestimate a man's "mojo", just because he's (for all technical purposes) a "wizard" (if-you-know-what-I-mean).

"And It Is Glorious!" ...... it's also APPROVED!

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When his cock shot up and hit her on the chin on pg.6, I couldn't help but imagine a voice going "Shoryuken!".

This was a good laugh, we need more fresh fun stuff like this, and less ugly dudes "destroying innocence" and all that, that stuff is overdone, kind of the "zombies" of hentai..

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@TheDiabolical It would have been better to just take the higher quality scan and input the previous translation onto it. Because this one is not as good. The phrasing, grammar, and positioning of words in the bubbles are all of inferior quality. I'd be disappointed if i commissioned something and it wasn't even done as well as something from half a decade ago. I mean what the hell is stuff like "i felt myself too much" supposed to mean at the end of chapter 2 here? Anyone that speaks english could tell you that it should be something like "i got ahead of myself" or "i got too full of myself". It's shit like that which makes me question the validity of the translation completely. The only reason i can even say he got the gist of things is because we have the previous version and the general translations line up for the most part. But phrases like the one i mentioned make me wonder how much going forward is just going to be wrong or lost. So that's why i wondered why they uploaded that first chapter, it just makes this one look worse by comparison.

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Yep she got uppercutted by a dick and now kidney punched by her friend, this is a true fighting manga

Ah yes the [ＦＵＣＫＭＡＳＴＥＲ ＤＸ ゅ王ま]

Last edited on 06 July 2020, 20:14 UTC.

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The story and characters is very likeable. Thanks for translating

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Chubs is a pretty great character. Slutty yet wholesome and easy to push around until she finally has enough and floors you. That body blow looked vicious.

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Dunno if you're interested in small corrections, but at the bottom of page 28, it should be "Didn't *your* mom" (not "you mom") and "Not at *school*" (not "shool"). Also, slightly nitpicking, but it should be spellt "whoa", not "woah" (e.g. page 30).

Thanks for the translation!

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Thanks for the constructive, King. Will fix it all with my next upload.

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I may be late at realizing this but im glad they have the "Domination loss" Tag now. I do enjoy those stories a lot when one person is dominating then it gets reversed by the end. Usually its funny and hot at the same time lol.

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Mizuho is like tailormade for ryona.

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They aren't in a relationship, but the Mizu girl has practically put herself in the cuck role by having the dude fuck the other girl. She really looked pissed when he commented on how great the thick girl was.

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Never seen "domination loss" before.

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The friend is fucking thick!!!

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Haven't laughed at a hentai so hard in a while! 10/10!

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what a heartwarming story about friendship and redemption

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@brandivolgio What face are you talking about?

Page 10 nipple seduction shot?
Page 9 blowjob seduction?
Page 23?

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Her name is Mizuha not Mizuho for fuck's sake.

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>domination loss
How did i not know this was a thing before

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These faces are absolutely wild, both hilarious and hot. 10/10

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