This is my first time making a CG work, so comments and criticisms on how to improve are welcomed.

Made this Using PlayHome studios from Illusion.

Had some problem with hair color in the dark so the hair on Asuka is off.

The content isn't for me, but I feel compelled to point out that aside from the neural clips this girl doesn't look anything like Asuka. Wrong hair, wrong skintone, wrong facial structure. None of the costume choices look like they're from even doujins much less the official source material. If you hadn't explicitly labeled it as NGE I would never have assumed it was related.

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Thanks for your comment, It is much appreciated your honest criticism.
to be honest, I have struggled to make her more accurate, on hair like i said before the shadows had the weird effect to make her that blonde color in the dark, I've changed it and by next chapter it should be red. on facial structures what do you mean? what would you say needs to be changed? and skin-tone what would be your recommendation? a paler tone?

On uniform, sadly that was the closest i could find to her uniform in NGE. I thought the change of color it would be make it somewhat similar, but unfortunately it seems I was wrong.

Last edited on 31 August 2020, 12:56 UTC.

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