Pages 11-12: What happened to the semen that was leaking out of her pussy? It couldn't have just vani... oh wait, this is fiction, which can contain as many inconsistencies as it wants if it doesn't want to be taken seriously. Really sketchy and novice feel to the art, which makes it appear to have been rushed (which would make this one jackass of an artist if he waited until right before deadline to start working on this). 2/5, as the art's crap.

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