Part 2 is out of the way! Part 3 is (hopefully) coming next week, since it has a lot of redraws and I really don't want to get lazy and delay it further. Make sure to thank futaB as well for his contribution!

TL: me, futaB
Cleaning and redrawing: me
Typesetting: me, futaB
Proofreading: futaB

Raws:
Part 1: /g/1558097/834d450733/
Part 2: /g/1614698/fec2c8e214/

If you have any suggestions or feedback leave a comment, and support the artist if you can!

Based Zxczxcasdasd
Many thanks

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it's already fourth page, the bad guy actually losing ? where is the netora-
>the bad guys use instant win button
yep classic bait and switch

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Another fantastic piece from Mr. Haneinu.
This is great NTR. If you guys didn't check this at the time, just wait for part 3.
Anyway, thanks a lot for the translation. You are the best!!!

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Wasn’t the haneinu work I was expecting to see translated, but hey a welcome surprise

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@RaizelX precisely why I chose it, seeing his previous works I expected someone to had translated this a while ago

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OH wait.. She was actually part of the Evil group?? welll... now it all makes sense.. That she can be brainwashed easily
and all that easy win from the NTRman xd

i normally don't like NTR stuff.. but after playing "Henteria" heh things change =x

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Thanks a lot!!! Was always looking forward to see this one in english xx

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Genuinely thought Kiiru was a chick up until page 15.

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@zxczxcasdasd Thanks for translation, I'm looking forward to part 2 and 3

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dude im not gonna lie but Haneinu has the best NTR stories out there ...

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Would've been better if he had ripped the shorts instead of pretending the weren't there.

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thanks a lot for the translation! cant wait for part 2 & 3

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Speaking of misconceptions, girls don't always bleed when the hymen is pierced. It can also tear during physical activities.

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I wonder why my other comment got negative score?? I didn't say anything bad.?
In fact i'm correct about the girl being easily brainwashed~ lol
also even mention that i don't dislike NTR anymore ... this community is really weird.

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This is getting very Ikameshi.

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Given the track record of this artist...I think we can guess what happens next.

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Can we get just ONE ntr story where the dude gets his girl back and murders the asshole that took her?

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@LiothG
One was posted up rather recently actually, Mamono no Monogatari ~Orc no Shounen Godo~.
/g/1760903/c56d80465a/

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@LiothG
- Enter into a NTR work made by a artist with history only working on NTR heavy stories since he started.
- Complains and ask for stuff that never happens in a NTR story and people who like NTR also never want to see something like that.
Can you be more stupid?

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NTR doesn't usually hit me like that. :( Hot art but poor guy!

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tfw you like orgasm count scenarios but hate that its tied to mind control despite having a mind control fetish

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Another bad ending for MC.. tsk damn poor lad, wish this was 4 or 5 chapters thou heh..
I've ran out of doujins i went and go to doujins i normally avoid xDD
NTR stories is really something for a change

MC didn't grind enough his level in that dungeon so he lost~ He is probably level 50 and the boss level 100~
His partner the heroine before all that is higher level than MC and much stronger so MC probably got carried by the girl and is only soaking up EXP..
Better man up next time~... well i hope there is a next time =x

What i learned from NTR fantasy stories dialogue be like

>I.. I will never give up! i can endure anything! he will save me for sure<
Next Panel
>Uoohohh! ouuu!! uoohhh!<

Last edited on 31 October 2020, 02:42.

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Are people really into fat ugly guys stealing beautiful women? I like the art, but the setting just makes me limp.

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just once i would like it if the hero is actually able to save the woman or just really anything beyond this tripe that this genre is just chock full of

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Auxiliary mind control device? Boooooo

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I hate netorare with a burning passion too, but even I know that they're all the same: guy who is fat and ugly (sometimes a muscular guy, but still ugly 99% of the time) steals away the cute and/or busty-as-all-hell girl away from her kind and handsome boyfriend, by using his unrealistically huge penis that's as thick as his arm to rape her until she enjoys it, and the boyfriend is always left to either wallow in despair or simply have no idea what's happening to his girl behind his back. Expecting anything else to happen in a netorare story, least of all the boyfriend actually getting his girl back and thrashing the guy who stole her away, is foolish. I sincerely don't understand the appeal, but that is just how it is.

It's a shame too, because a lot of people who draw netorare are really good artists, but squander their talents on these feel-bad stories. Like this one, the girl is really, REALLY cute and sexy, great outfit, great design, and I really dig how she's a bit plump, not to the point of being able to be considered fat, but just the right amount of "thiccness", and she seems like she's a bit short too, I REALLY like girls who are smol but have curvaceous bodies, and of course, she has huge tits and a huge ass too. Had this been a vanilla story with the same design for the girl, it would have gotten an omega-nut from me. But it was not to be, and this book was very upfront about what kind of story it was going to be almost as soon as it starts, and expecting it to go in any other direction would just be delusional.

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