There's some probabaly wrong translation within this gallery
especially Page 6, first panel, left dialogue
if anyone can read chinese can tell me the correct line i don't mind editing it

这本质量好高

Base +2, RoDeRang +6

Can't say I expected meta doujinshi, but mihoyo is so cheap with handing out primogems that I can't blame poor Lumine for resorting to this, at least she enjoys it at the end.

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Page 1.

You looks so lewd! > You look so lewd

Page 2.

...it didn't sounds like a bad deal, right... > ...it doesn't sound like a bad deal, right...

Are you sure you don't want to became prostitute? > Are you sure you don't want to become a prostitute?

Page 4.

I'm just happened to be in the area... > I just happened to be in the area...

Page 6.

...buttons at the same time to activates Sneak Mode > ...buttons at the same time to activate Sneak Mode

Still not fond of the alcohol, sir? > Still not fond of alcohol, sir?

The Auto Moan skill will be subdued as long you managed to keep the mode active. > The Auto Moan skill will be subdued as long as you manage to keep the mode active.

Page 7.

This will makes the drink taste completely different than usual! > This will make the drink taste completely difference than usual!

Page 10.

Still, don't let my visit here ruins your fun. > Still, don't let my visit here ruin your fun.

Page 11.

excelent > excellent

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:o thank you @Mr_Person

i will update the pages as soon as i can

Base +1

This has as good Paimon grimaces as the game does.

Base +6

Needs more doujin about Lumine getting gang banged.

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