My first translation.
Apologies for some of the rough translation.
It was translated from the Chinese version.

Well, I can't read Chinese or even Japanese. So I can't give you any suggestion, because I haven't read "original".before.
But, if we ignore that, I think your translation is OK. It's very good job for the 1st one.

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I think you need to use better font

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Hope to keep up， although I almost can not read English

真难得看到英译中的日漫，楼主会中文不会日语吗（华人）？

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Thank you for the translation although the font was kinda hard to read i can't complain because i still could read it hehehe

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Wonderful, no big deal with the fonts, at least its translated. Thanks

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Love ya. Glad this one got translated already. Now waiting for the other ones.

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Thanks for the translation. would be great if you could do Sakiko-san no Dansei as well.

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D: It was hot, but, bad end. :(

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great stuff. love the artwork and style, story was a little generic, but it still worked.

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I hate this kind of netorare/rape so much , but i just can't ignore Jin's draw

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women who only thinking a lust rather than love :(

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I started reading and thought it was going to all be ok, but then I saw her enter the office and saw those pills.
I NOPE'D the fuck out of there right on that page. Fuck that.

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French Translated: /g/658562/966b205814/
Spanish Translated: /g/466288/557b434af3/
Portuguese Translated: /g/698424/46f6aa47bb/
Thai Translated: /g/654047/7c0e6d242e/
Korean Translated: /g/620206/900ceb97a7/
Chinese Translated: /g/250970/ecf206b02b/

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