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Marie by @auroch_nsfw

Western
Posted:2024-08-03 22:20
Parent:2991119
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:59.95 MiB
Length:97 pages
Favorited:442 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.88
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Posted on 03 August 2024, 22:20 by:   Gugassauros2    PM
Uploader Comment
https://twitter.com/Auroch_nsfw
Posted on 17 March 2024, 00:50 by:   hateeeeeee    PM
Score +10
好的原创故事,爱来自中国👍👍🇨🇳
Posted on 17 March 2024, 05:52 by:   archmancer8    PM
Score +229
On the one hand, hyper tits that are drawn to have visual weight and mass: hell yes. On the other hand, this gallery has precisely 0 good vibes. This character feels like just distilled depression.
Posted on 18 March 2024, 01:20 by:   asurastrkr    PM
Score +12
Assuming she's against OF, if she were to just swallow her pride for a short while she would be in a much better spot financially
Posted on 18 March 2024, 04:53 by:   Ignitation    PM
Score +6
@archmancer8 I would too if I got a flesh masses that one hand attract every single pair of eye in the room to them so much so I became center of attraction and on the other hand These thing simply gave me a neck pain day in day out.
Posted on 19 March 2024, 16:08 by:   Mike-O-Shay    PM
Score +12
The inking/colouring on a lot of these isn't up to the same quality as the original sketches, is that being done by someone else?
Posted on 19 March 2024, 16:20 by:   Gugassauros2    PM
Score -16
@Mike-O-Shay i colored it, i was kinda horny so i saw the sketches from a long time ago so i tried to finish the sketches myself, what do you think ? Do you like ?
Posted on 10 April 2024, 19:47 by:   Mike-O-Shay    PM
Score +42
@Gugassauros2 - The linework isn't smooth enough, and with this aesthetic it needs antialiasing. Inking is supposed to be a "best pass" of the lines from the sketch, but here it's winding up jerky/jagged, and sometimes the lines aren't cut off cleanly between layers. On the balcony one where her top's bursting open, a bunch of lines from the bed are jabbing through her arm. Lines that should be perfectly straight, like the doorframe, glass, and chair, are wobbly and lumpy. Even the ones that are "straight" have the distracting aliased staircasing effect.

You're doing an alright job working on shading, and adding some extra touches to flesh out the pieces (sheen on glass/hair, extra touches with shadows/textures/patterns) but the biggest mark against it is the squiggly linework.

I think it would benefit from experimenting with brushes and width a bit more, and possibly a better separation between the character and the things around her. Maybe different linework for characters that aren't the main focus, or no dark lines at all on background elements. Use the straight line tool more, or use a program that will autocorrect lines into a vector.

Personally, if I'm browsing through a gallery like this, I'm drawn in by the character's original artist. I don't browse character galleries too often, so I don't know what the standard sort order is, but I'd prefer if all the official art was grouped together at the start, either old>new or new>old, with fan works and spinoff attempts all listed after it.
Posted on 15 June 2024, 10:53 by:   rencen    PM
Score -9
Ok since this is hyper boob with "realism" why not go to surgery to get them reduce?
Posted on 16 June 2024, 00:38 by:   Gugassauros2    PM
Score +2
For those curious about her here are the links for her story:
https://www.deviantart.com/surplusexistance/art/Marie-s-Mammary-Misgivings-part-I-917572078
Posted on 16 June 2024, 04:23 by:   YoKnight    PM
Score +34
@rencen damn thats crazy. you didn't try to read the FIRST 3 PAGES
Posted on 21 June 2024, 06:05 by:   vlnshnltt    PM
Score +98
Kinda feel like the artist wants people to feel bad for liking giant tits
Posted on 23 June 2024, 12:22 by:   Gugassauros2    PM
Score +2
He kinda likes is more part of his sassy humor

Ive been coloring new pages, what do you think of those recent ones ?
Last edited on 23 June 2024, 12:43.
Posted on 27 June 2024, 11:25 by:   Mike-O-Shay    PM
Score +6
Personally, I think it looks much better than the older attempts! Nice colour choices for each of the scenes, and I think you're getting pretty good at adding shading.
The sketchy lines work pretty well, to the point where I thought the new coloured posts might actually be from the original artist.

Mostly looking at the last picture, I like the leaves you added to the top of the Hang In There poster. I think the area under her desk should look like a floor, and the bottom-left of his desk was probably supposed to be a drawer or panel, and not open to the carpet. I don't think the guy's shelves were supposed to have glass, but I think it fits pretty well. I like the wall corner continuing up to the top of the comic, it makes the top panels more visually interesting and adds some nice continuity through the picture, even if it doesn't make literal sense that her room would be that tall.

It's up to you if you want to experiment with the linework again, but there are a lot of subtle artistic things this guy does with the sketches (smooth curvature, line thickness/hardness), and it would take a lot of care to make that translate well to a more "finished"-looking inking.

I wish the original artist would draw more stuff with her, it feels like there haven't been any completely new pics added here in a while.
Posted on 18 July 2024, 16:29 by:   defcon5    PM
Score +6
IMO, just hook her up to a milking machine, make her breasts hypersensitive and be done with it.

Immobilized-Orgasming-Milk-Factory >>> Breast too big misery Porn
Posted on 26 September 2024, 04:26 by:   OMJay    PM
Score +48
Is there an appeal to this kind of character that I'm not getting? I just feel judged when I want to be feeling horny.
Posted on 28 September 2024, 17:20 by:   Jacksozlack    PM
Score +7
pic 36 really speaks too me

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