Try centering the text next time, and you should usually do easy SFX/moans, especially when they're in large bubbles. I know it was on the fly and all, but otherwise it looks fine.

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thanks for translated this

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Great doujin, and very acceptable translation. Thank you very much!

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This was our first doujinshi translation. I feel that is was rushed but I am glad people enjoyed it. we are thinking about doing more. thanks for reading it.

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Talking about fast translation.

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Anybody up for a retranslation, Genesis Style?

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Miss Kneesocks, your face is turning red.

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This was a cute story.
"What you say!?"

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