I know it could've been drawn better, but you have to like the story and love the ending. Check out brightstuf.com if you want a good deal on the anime dvds.
Thanks, I never hoped that this doujins'd be translated. I love Flay x Kira doujins (there aren´t hardly any compared with Kira x Evil Pink Princess doujins). Hahaha, in all the doujin Kira talks three times and only to say Flay. And as you said the final is awesome, poor Flay xD. Hope you translate more Kira x Flay.
The art and translation aren't the best, but it's nice to see that at least some doujin artists have been making new material featuring this pairing. Up until now I thought that the one at /g/271384/1a0420c128/ was the only doujinshi with this pairing that would ever be translated.
Fllay was a tragic character who deserved more of a chance at redemption than she got, and it certainly helped that she was voiced by Houko Kuwashima in the anime. As for this particular doujinshi, I'd certainly like to know if Fllay changes her tune towards Coordinators in a future installment continuing this storyline. Like a certain character in Code Geass discovered, it's hard to continue holding a negative prejudice towards a group you dislike if you're carrying one of their children. ESPECIALLY if that child was conceived out of love.