Front Page
Watched
Popular
Torrents
Favorites
My Home
My Uploads
Toplists
Bounties
News
Forums
Wiki
HentaiVerse

[Sgomma3] Experimental Hormones Part 1

Misc
Posted:2011-05-03 22:44
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:2.86 MB
Length:38 pages
Favorited:32 times
Rating:
29
Average: 1.30

Showing 1 - 38 of 38 images

<1>
4 rows
10 rows
20 rows
40 rows
Normal
Large
01
02
03
04
05
06
07
08
09
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
32
33
34
35
36
37
38
<1>
Posted on 03 May 2011, 23:00 UTC by:   MissyMcG    PM
Score +53
Sorry, but your English is kinda awful. You could really need a better translator.
Posted on 04 May 2011, 03:06 UTC by:   xXBlueFireXx    PM
Score +43
I'm pretty sure it's a machine translation.
Posted on 04 May 2011, 04:18 UTC by:   D u b b y    PM
Score +36
Can machine translation be a tag? Like, a bad tag? Please?
Posted on 04 May 2011, 16:44 UTC by:   TwiTwi    PM
Score +57
@sgomma3:
You should give your work to someone who can proofread it. Also, try to make more quality instead of quantity. Your comics look like you are playing with barbie dolls. Add shadows, let the characters act more naturally to their environment. They lie on the beds like sticks and sit the same way.
And instead of putting everything in speechbubbles, you could also add "normal" text.
Posted on 04 May 2011, 18:50 UTC by:   sgomma3    PM
Score +39
i am italian the ispiration is only my idea i use 3d sexvilla is not professional there is easy
Posted on 04 May 2011, 19:15 UTC by:   StevieWicks    PM
Score +30
Yeah, I totally appreciate the effort, but there are times when I'm not even sure what the character is trying to say.

[Post New Comment]

[Front Page]

Terms of Service