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(C77) [Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Gokiburi (Darker Than Black) [english] [machine]

(C77) [シュート・ザ・ムーン (フエタキシ)] ゴキブリ (Darker Than Black) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2011-05-17 19:53
Parent:None
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Language:English  TR
File Size:14.72 MB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:973 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.53

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Posted on 17 May 2011, 19:53 UTC by:   mlkio    PM
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This is a machine translation. I didn't translate this. It was auto-translated, and then I just fixed the grammar. Hopefully, we'll have a proper translation one day, but it's doubtful since it' been more than a year already.
Posted on 17 May 2011, 20:02 UTC by:   Pennington    PM
Score +177
"Accurate"? That pretty much shows you have no idea.
Posted on 17 May 2011, 20:11 UTC by:   themasamune    PM
Score +26
not a bad idea, and not a bad attempt either. there were still quite a few lines that i thought any native English speaker wouldn't leave as they were, but i can't imagine what the machine must have spat out... I'm not too familair with the source this donjon comes from, but the way people spoke still sounded very "machine". you can tell it's machine translated, despite the efforts to correct grammar. all onomatopoeia and "yatta" have just been rendered into English, which doesn't really work unless you know the Japanese word as well... the edit work is adequate, although the way the text was placed in the bubbles was very bizarre, seemingly hastily done.

the story itself is standard "I order you to netorare while your pathetic would-be-lover squirms!", but the art is hot.
Posted on 17 May 2011, 20:13 UTC by:   Schroedinger    PM
Score +252
Let's look at it from this angle.

If you knew Japanese, you'd have done a TL proper.

Since you apparently don't, there is NO WAY for you to know if it is accurate or not.

Am I not right?
Posted on 17 May 2011, 20:25 UTC by:   Red_Piotrus    PM
Score +362
Don't flame the author, he disclosed it is a MT. If you don't like it, go and arrange fro a proper translation, or stare at the RAW.

I shrudder to think how many "translations" out there are MTs that are simply not annouced as such.

Also, pros and cons of MTs have been discussed on our forums, in the "Cove of Translators" section. I suggest that anybody interested in a more proper discussion goes there.

Also, to get a proper translation, consider posting a bounty. Through that system I've arranged for many dozens of translations...
Posted on 26 June 2011, 11:45 UTC by:   lamaig    PM
Score +50
Well, it can't be called NTR i think. After initiation the user becomes brainwashed, so we have here 2 different persons. Before and after. It was always irritaiting for me in Darker tnan Black.
Posted on 13 December 2012, 02:08 UTC by:   Enki17    PM
Score -23
God damn, and I usually hate ntr.
Posted on 21 January 2013, 09:21 UTC by:   BillNine10    PM
Score +13
@lamaig Actually no, its still in many ways the same person even after they "awaken." In the anime, ever after she turned into a contractor, she still made it clear that if she was to have a baby with anyone, it would be her boyfriend. Its just that their priorities and way of thinking is just switched around; the guy that she loves the most romantically is still the boyfriend, its just that romance is not all that important to her anymore.

Anyways, this hentai is freaking amazing, the art and execution is awesome.
Posted on 21 April 2015, 07:30 UTC by:   Grimrabbit    PM
Score +5
Booo Netoshit, I still dislike its concept and all it stands for.

Yeah that's right, came here JUST to say this and you read it.

Lastly t(-_-t) <---to all you downvoters
Posted on 30 March 2016, 12:08 UTC by:   Sparky7491    PM
Score +6
I hope one with a better translation is uploaded sometime in the future.
Posted on 23 July 2019, 21:22 UTC by:   lolgay3    PM
Score +7
Damn this artist seriously has an insect fetish lol

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