Fixed typos and errors:

pages 11, 25, 47, 67, 72, 77, 83, 102, 103, 112, 118, 123, 131, 147, 148, 151, 166, 169, 175, 180 and 181
(http://desudesu0.com/archives/8450)

Replace: /g/337524/111cbc908e/

reading this again, you can see where he got stuck and gave up on this story.

edit: to me its more like he started the story, had a basic idea how it should go, but ran out of ideas for all but one character so he half-assed the rest and collected his check.

Base +8, The Noodles -6, Kapistrannus +9, Sushilicious +28, Kiriax +9, slayergod +5, ReverieM +6, no-name here +9, KJacket +14, danixxx +30, JigokuRori +3, Nuuskapeke -7, Z-Bunny +7, and 8 more...

Yeah, Murasaki Shu seems to have the bad habit of just not giving a crap at some point.

Base +9, The Noodles -6, Kapistrannus +9, Kiriax +9, ReverieM +6, no-name here +9, danixxx +30, Nuuskapeke -7, Ooe Kintarou +1, alixraen +6

Netorare... DENIED!

Base +10, shadowkazumanic +8, Ronan666 -5, KaiserBuliwyf +7, alixraen +6, Zantos -7, psicomenace -11

really love this section!!! cant wait for others!!

Base +1

Needed to have more stories about the girl who fucked her brother and got caught by that guy. Got stuck on that one girl for too long

Base +1

Would be perfection without the cuck/NTR shit

Base +5, Zantos -7, akunoko +24