It's not bad, however it skips far too much and can't be called rape a matter of seconds in. If it's meant to be mind break, it missed that by a mile too, show more of the story.
Base +1
Posted on 18 February 2012, 01:48 UTC by: Master117
Score +7
it's nice that you colored all pages, but maybe you should focus more on the content, less skipping than on coloring