Translator: Asou
Editor: Afro Thunda

Littlewhitebutterflies.net

This is a common work of Nagare Ippon. Anyway I feel sorry for the boy of the story.

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Forset, it happens a lot in netorare. It makes the ending hurt even more. She believes that the boyfriend could never satisfy her, even if he did get the chance. Plus, she probably hasn't even seen his penis before, the line just causes more rage for the reader.

I really want to know what kind of father she has. What else did he think could possibly happen to her after spending a year as his sex slave?

Anyways....I'm pretty sure that Nagare Ippon has used several of the girl's positions before (most of his girls look the same). They might have even been cut and pasted.

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I just think its funny that this girl was on the cover of Nagare's last tank which has the same name as this story but this story wasn't even in the tank, lol.

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i wonder how a psychotic boy/girl would fare in a NTR story... o_o

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Typical run-of-the-mill NTR story. The only thing that makes it awesome is that it was done by Nagare Ippon. Maybe I'm messed up in the head, but these types of NTR short stories don't bother me anymore.

Anyway, thanks LWB. Bang-up job, as usual.

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@Forset

Judging by the amount of NTR Nagare Ippon's already done, it certainly seems like he doesn't care about anything like a "ruined image" or some such. So he must do stories like this because A) He likes fucking with people's emotions. B) He likes writing these types of stories and fucking with people's emotions. Or C) He does it for the lulz and to fuck with people's emotions. That Nagare Ippon sure has a cruel since humor.

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One must never blame the translator, they probably got a) commissioned or b) requested to translate it.
Besides that, Nagare has been doing NTR for quite a while so we should actually prepare for it instead of flaming the translator, be prepared so you wont rage~

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Less talk and more FAP

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What amazing conclusion omfglol, apparently translators would NEVER work on any of this stuff on their own free will.

Doesn't really surprise me the scene is so full of prepubescent guys who can't see beyond their own nose.

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i hate wen it wents bad for the couple the boy is totaly crushed i feal his pain thank godnes it didnt hapen to me i dont now what shaw i do if it does !

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This story has been done to death and beyond. Why can't people be more like Inomaru with their NTR?

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many people aren't bother with this kind of ntr anymore because there is no real reason for us to feel anything for the characters...usually you see the boy and girl and their relationship...here we no nothing about them...hell the dude doesn't even have a face...well i just like nagare's art style...if it wernt for that i wouln't be here...i like vanilla over chocolate anyday (im talking about ice-cream)

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I like how I was able to just look at the preview image and say that this was going to be NTR.

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as an NTR story this one is pretty light actually, we don't really see enough of their relationship to feel bad for them, and the boyfriend only appears in a few panels...or something like that >.>

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My god, Why can't they reverse the character. Like the Old fat man was the couple with this girl, then this boy steal the girl from him.
Wouldn't that lessen the anger from the readers?

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dont blame the author, blame the father of the girl ~

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NAAAHHH... the boy is free ,and can get a nice GF ,the slut is happy ,no harm at all ,everyone is ok,and the boy is saved ,he can do a normal life

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"DICK IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING
" LOL! ..definitely a mind break story :)

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nagare ippon is really an acquired taste.

At first I disliked how easily the girls were mindbroken but it grew on me and now I think his NTR-rape-mindbreak is among the best.

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