the first comic I've ever uploaded. this is work in progress black and white version that (in the unfortunate absensce of a scanner) I have used a camers to record. enjoy.

REMAKE CANCELLED

i have redone the Victini issues but will not show them here. the colored remastered version will feature that (eventually -_-)

(You will see them on any new pages from here on out tho just not the ones that are already there)

Awesomeness!

Base +12, shizukuxii +23, cman1361 -9, VaryEx +6, Sushilicious +28

i like the art, a bit blurry on some pages but i can understand not having a scanner... some parts are down right impossible to read tho, so i would suggest using paint or gimp or whatever image editor you have to fill in speech... it may not look very nice but it would at least allow people to fully enjoy the other half of your work... you have talent, i would like to keep seeing more from you

Base +7, Sushilicious +28

Why don't you go to a paper shop and make them scan it for you?

Base +6, Sushilicious +28, Dennis6 +1

1/6 seconds is too slow for hand held without any stabilization (no optical VR and the electronic VR is ineffective on the S3000), there is some motion blur pretty much everywhere.

f3.2 is too fast, because of the narrow depth of field, some parts are out of focus (it could work if your sheet is perfectly parralel to your camera)

800ISO is wayyy too high for a Coolpix S3000 and on a static/studio work that can be lighted at will you better use 80ISO and adapted light source (bounce flash, reflector or whatever uniform, powerfull and reflected light source).

You could use some postprocessing in order to get rid of the vignetting and increase the contrast.
Don' t forget to crop the useless parts on top/bottom, correct the perspectives and resize, 195MB for 77files is insanely huge considering the image quality.

Base +4, w3w3w3 +7, Sushilicious +28, shinobioli +11

whaddya mean?

Base +3

I cant see what is in this comic, its maybe goodwho knows. but if i cant see it i cant rate it.

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