Translated from /g/407014/d2d9a2f4c5/

Translated by Ulricat and Rage Manga
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Thanks. Sex scene is really good and the story is great for NTR plots.

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Hopefully I translated it right. I couldn't find the original Japanese so I did it from the Chinese version. The Chinese version is not translated very well. Maybe it was translated from a Japanese person for a Taiwanese audience as some of the Chinese doesn't make sense to me. Without the original Japanese I am not sure of the literal meaning in some parts so I tried as much as I could to follow the story but make it digestible for an English reader.

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She was in that van for a long time!

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Pretty good... but that ending was way to cruel for me to really enjoy this...

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@ Drunkenmaste

You're new at this, ain't ya?

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I have to agree with Drunkenmaste, I don't think this is NTR. It could have been, but it's really just Rape and kindnapping. Had the girl gone with them willingly in the end, or even be willing after the time skip, then it would be NTR, but there is a difference between NTR and Rape.

NTR is the metaphorical 'stealing' of the girl, where the girl is taken from the guy by someone else at least somewhat willingly like cuckolding (The two are kinda synonyms), this is just kidnapping. NTR is just becoming too common of a tag because people don't always fully understand what it means.

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This got translated? I hope Otomedori gets translated eventually then. I love carn's stuff.

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Remember, beaches are dangerous

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So that's where Duke Nukem was all those years...raping women on beaches. Makes sense.

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I'm confused on being aroused or saddend from the story ç____ç

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So, why didn't she cry out for help like she did in the beginning when she found out people were watching her?

These plots, man. These plots.
I felt like the author did that to get the pregnancy in there at the last second.

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The original is here:
/s/e12fa6c8d0/290319-84

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Oh God, those rape plots are getting on my nerves so much. Looks like the most of guys just can't get aroused if girls are doing this on their free will... Or just can't get girls to do it on their free will.
The story is really cruel and sad, but the most horrible thing about these stories is that those guys never get that they deserve and are never caught or blamed for what they had done, just like raping, kidnapping and torturing people is a normal thing. Oh how I wish to read a manga or doujin where these bastards are killed or at last arrested at the end... If it won't be released before I learn how to draw better anatomy, I'm going to make something like that myself.

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Pretty messed up. Not my cup of tea.

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sweet world of carn......

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Ahh.. Rape always give me this warm good feeling in my stomach :).

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As always Carn is great to look at, but not much to think about. Not bad, but nothing hasn't done before. Thanks for the share.

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DO NOT WANT. (/O.O)/

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first time i don't like rape hentai. (i even thought it was romance first time i saw it)

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Sex scene is pretty good but the ending is quite cruel. :(

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That was.......pretty bad

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lol in the van for 9 months huh

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Ugh, rape fic no thanks.

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Added this to favourites, but only because of the art. I don't really like those kind of violent stories and the ending was definitely too much for me. :/

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@ Rein Deilerd
I agree, other than being lured by amazing artwork such as Carn's, i end up opening and read Netorare manga and doujins with 2 or 3 hopes: 1. it ends with the criminal(s) get tortured in ways that make medieval torture an anecdote for toddlers with the protagonist getting a compensation lovely scene with forgiveness and reassurement that he'll never let anything happen to her again; 2. the often dense and wimpy bf actually mans up and protects/defends his beloved before shit gets out of control; 3. at the very least maybe the story won't be too disturbing to the point of breaking a massive boner that otherwise the great artwork could have sustained

Really, Carn-san, you have amazingly talented fingers to draw, but, what sort of events happened in your life to inspire such disgust-inducing stories, i'm not so sure i wanna know about.

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ROFLMAO @Dr. Krieger

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Sigh, and I just polished my blade too. Looks like I'll let it have its blood meal for cleaving perfectly well.-rests blunt on shoulder-

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Well the ending is certainly cruel, but moreover, I think it's just out of place.
The writer could have easily cut that part out, maybe show the rapists blackmailing her or something.
The dark [coloring] tones of that last page are an inappropriate contrast to the rest of the relatively lighter tones of every page before it, granted the subject matter was still "dark," yet it worked just fine without the literal dark tones.
I mean just look at that bondage shit and the awkward square framing: you can barely recognize it's even her!
It makes sense the rapists might take her some place where they could get away with equipment like that after they were done on the beach, but it's not necessary and still a jarring afterthought that breaks the consistency of the story.

EDIT: I looked back through and didn't even notice the van in page 18.
That being said, I still think the pregnant/bdsm thing doesn't fit with the rest of the piece.

EDIT2: shit, I must've read a raw of this before, because I barely remember any of the dialogue.
Not that I generally pay attention to it anyways >_>
I digress: SUNSCREEN LOTION FOR LUBE IS A DUMB FUCKING IDEA
Trust me, I tried >.<

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Poor Girl.

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Well that escalated quickly.

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Your chastity only makes my dick harder.

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@FudgeSickle she did scream for help when she saw that people were watching. but the assholes ignored it because they didn't recognize it was the girl they were looking for

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shit, i wanted to jackoff and this ended up being a turn down

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