Hey guys,

This one has been around for awhile and I'm now posting the completed tank. Chapters 1-4 are decensored. Though chapter 8 was translated and decensored, I'm replacing it with Brolen's translation and that version isn't decensored . This tank was I originally commissioned to Faytear back in 2010 and had assistance in paying for by Highlow88 & BetterEnding.

This brings me to the biggest topic, Faytear is retiring from editing as real life is calling him to do great things. He will definitely be missed as an editor and I want to thank him for doing my commissions and helping me as I started to venture into editing.

Here's an except from his final announcement about his remaining projects.

"Tadanohito will be continuing In Her Crack and Kanjyuku so those are covered. Tonigobe has agreed to edit the joint projects we have together so those are covered and as for the rest I’ve sent them to Psyburn to take them over (the ever so popular Sanbun and others).

So you guys don’t have to worry about the projects not being finished. Only 1 project was left unfunded and that was Women of Yearning. Psyburn will finish up the editing on the unfinished chapters and I’ll let him decided if he still wants to continue that or not."

To honor Faytear's contribution to the hentai community, I will be completing the Women of Yearning tank in time. Also, if you all were wondering about [Sakaki Utamaru] Nuki X Sen, Torn still has that project and Afro Thunda will be completing the editing on that in time.

Translator: Brolen
Editors: Faytear, Gio, Someone1001
Commissions/Contributors: Highlow88, Psyburn21, BetterEnding

Happy Fapping

I noticed a editing issue on a page in chapter 7 after I uploaded everything. I'll go back fix it and any other issues that show up. If you see something out of wack, let me know by posting comments here or on my site http://www.funeralofsmiles.com/

update, I've decided to complete the translation of this tank as well /g/342934/dd35d14de9/

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I don't like ntr but can't avoid this one.

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Nobody cares about how much any of you guys hate NTR and bitching about it is not going to make it go away.

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Its a planned NTR, the guy likes it, so nothing heartbreaking...

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Palaxius: I've read some Carn doujin, he's more like mind break type manga artist than the ntr ones. Have you read I will protect you and Confession From Beyond the Mirror by Nagare Ippon? I know it's just short(3 and 1 chapter) and not as lengthy as Sanbun kyoden's work but admit it, It made you rage.

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yuiyounha: you are seriously underestimating Carn and overestimating Nagare Ippon.

Also, just a tip to the people thinking first chapter has happy ending: it does not.

EDIT: Yes to the first question, "not really" to the "rage" one, most of the time those stories either are clichè or so poorly conceived that once you've read enough you stop taking them seriously.

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Wow so the NTR one was just all according to plan anyway. What a tweest.

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last page its really worth...xD

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That... that wasn't NTR. THAT WASN'T EVEN CHEATING!
And in case you might think so NTR isn't my thing... I tend to feel too much pain for the guy getting screwed over.

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Isn't the NTR tag rather misleading?

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Actually you don't even have to read Otomedori to realise chapter 1 won't have a happy ending. It just takes being able to read #5 and #204 (or, obviously, looking at them but then you can't really be sure). Too bad they weren't translated.

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@Yossarian762

You cared enough to bitch about people bitching about it.

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Error in title. Please correct

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For those who don't know, the sequel to the first story is here: /g/572477/3a96e5a02e/

Also, an OVA is being made of said sequel because the sequel is so much better.

@Loki The Flameshield

Well because NTR is better, obviously. Also, because the sudden genre shift from a harem to an NTR would be a risky marketing move. Making an OVA is not nearly as cheap as drawing a doujin and you risk turning off people who might be fan of one genre but not the other, causing you to lose both. Carn is already a well-known NTR artist in the doujin scene so everyone already knows what to expect from him anyways.

Last edited on 23 October 2016, 03:06 UTC.

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The second that I hit 92, I just couldn't stop laughing. That guy looks like he was drawn using rendering software from 1992.

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Why couldn't the animated one be about the first chapter instead of the shit they made.

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