Incredibly difficult to follow to me, but not necessarily because of the translation.
Base +10
Posted on 24 February 2012, 02:14 UTC by: Hecklion
Score +48
The draw, I remember Genshiken Characters "Anyway my manga are about gangbangs an netorare and it doesn´t seem to be what you are looking for." meanwhile in Japan JIN-sensei playing MW3 "And I Did´t manage to become a Wizard" joke from Hanagai, if you're a virgin at 30 years old, you become a Wizard
Base +7, luminisk +8, amt +7, Kantzakolt +8, enyoeos -8, Zaolao +7, Bigslam1993 +8, Hyoros +7, Haruka Aiphos +4
Posted on 24 February 2012, 02:24 UTC by: dorarado
I was just about to give up on Hentai until I read this. Nice pick. One constructive criticism, I wouldn't use "LOL", I'd just use a "Heh heh" or something.
This I really liked and enjoyed, for both the H and for the story. The start of the story and the end were rather nice touches. It is said that an artist draws inspiration from real life and sometimes incorporates such things in their work, this kind of doing that I really like.