My 43rd translation bounty completed. About the time a Hayate Yagami doujin was finally translated & edited...

Translated by qaqtusman, proofed by me, and edited by Harzle.

Reading a Nanoha doujin that isn't yuri or Caro x Erio is strange lol, but this is pretty good.

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It's finally here~!

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Reading a Nanoha doujin that isn't yuri should be more than "pretty good." :)

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I'm glad you found someone to fix up the really tough Kansai-ben that gave me a hard time. These kind of jokes are really hard to get.

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Translated Hayate doujins? What is the world coming to!

Not complaining, I'm just happy to see my favourite character getting some time in the spotlight again.

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No voted you down for saying something as stupid as "Mad Respect for The Author and Editor by standing against the Yuri Fanatics of this fandom" as if drawing porn in which heterosexual sex is such a brave or amazing act. Not to mention that MOST Nanoha H doujins tend to be straight or futa anyways.

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"Vanilla" stories like these are so rare as to be a breath of fresh air in the doujin world. A couple consummating their romance in this fashion makes this one an undiscovered gem.

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Het, yuri, who cares. *I'm* giving the creators points for having Griffith here, who I'm not sure I've ever seen in a doujinshi before. I love seeing rare characters and pairings appear.

(Caro/Erio is common? I see plenty of Erio/Fate, but hardly any Caro/Erio. And why don't I see Erio/Subaru or Caro/Fate more often?)

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