It is so hard to see what the heck is going on in the black and white panels, and the first picture is kind of small. x.x

Base +9

You have to fuck your suit if you want to transform?

Thats...new and erotic

Wish the art was a tad cleaner though, some pretty sexy concepts here

Base +7

Everything from the story, panels etc already look good. I think he just need some manga assistant. So much stuffs to do if he's working this by himself.

Base +10, Emoxvx +10