The realm of Equestria has been distroyed by an unknown force known as 'The Darkness', this once beautiful place is now a living nightmare; old friends become deadly enemies, the corruptions twists everything that was once pure and death awaits on every corner. The restauration of this place now lies in the hoofs of a human girl turned into an Unicorn known as Lauren Sharp, this is her story and this is her Legacy. Welcome to Lauren's Legacy.

CRAWLING IN MY SKIN! THESE WOUNDS, THEY WILL NO HEAL!!

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Story's Meh, it threw so much at the audience in just 20 pages!, but i'm curious as to why the world just suddenly warped, I'm not a pony fan, but usually interesting things come out of this... like Ask Jappleack

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I can see that's it's quite heavily based on american mcgees alice in wonderland.

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There is a point where this needs to stop, and we have CLEARLY passed it.

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Is there gonna be more?

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At least Ask Jappleack was pleasing to look at... and funny... and interesting... and original... and basically everything this isn't.

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Must be pretty hard to know, that people make up such heavy storys about your life just because you wanted to draw a cartoon that makes little girls happy.

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You might want to consider learning how to draw before going on with this. Also, how to write.
English lessons wouldn't hurt, either.
You know what? Forget it. Just stop.

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Its a very well thought out story and the drawing needs just a little inprovement, but all in all its a great series and i hope you continue it in the near future.

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eh, Never Ending Story + Alice in Wonderland + My Little Pony = this crap,

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Oh look, fan fiction that is drawn horribly instead of just being easily ignored words. ...also... is this supposed to be Lauren Faust, or some kind of OC BS? Either way it sucks.

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well, i can see why people dislike this. But personally i really like it this type of storys,
the art can be inproved by its good enoth if this is the same type of story as american mcgees alice in wonderland.
and besides, is it the plot or the art that makes a good story ? take it with some salt if you dont like it.
6.5 / 10 imo im going to jump the 2nd part if it ever comes out.

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all I can say is this.......welcome to wonderland........(see Alice madness returns for detals)

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Holy fuck, that teddy bear has Silent Hill written all over it.

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My Little Pony: Mental Health Issues are Magic.

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