i'm a new fish

Another terrible fucking rewrite.

At least TRY.

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Unreadable font, terrible english. Good job...

Base +20, tcvds +7, S0B +15, Kenzaki Kazuma +24, Dikastes +8, Humbard +8, Person8 +10, undefined00 +5, TempRarity +8, Agent09 +11, Anonymous777 +9, sandyface +2, saintabe +9, and 27 more...

Was this made using google translate from three different languages?

Base +10, tcvds +7, Kenzaki Kazuma +24, TempRarity +8, Can i haz milk? +12, jaylou1010 +9, mojomunkeez +15, mooplololol +7, scrappy135 +8, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, Silvie +19, Horizon992 +5, and 3 more...

It's like you google translated from one language to another...57 times.
Well at least you're....new fish?What the hell is new fish?!?

Base +13, tcvds +7, The Noodles +7, Gitami +13, Can i haz milk? +12, ENHfaithful +3, jaylou1010 +9, mojomunkeez +15, Subjho +6, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, Horizon992 +5, LeisureLarry +5

What a beautiful Duwang! There must be no other place as pretty as this town.

Base +5, qwopqwop +10, Kenzaki Kazuma +24, Dikastes +8, TempRarity +8, Dynellen +19, Anonymous777 +9, lostlegoman +12, riku13 +5, Eyriol +7, jaylou1010 +9, mooplololol +7, EagleEye89 +13, and 9 more...

That was cruel, you monster.

Base +9, Marisa Kirisame +8

I hate you, with every fiber of my being.

Base +6, Urmean15 +11, jaylou1010 +9, mojomunkeez +15, Fenrirdies +8, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8

Why use the old scan for translation. A newer version is available with better quality at

/g/545279/2e0c411494/

please retranslate

Base +7, Vuffy -6, Ayasesama -11, ebspacc -8, Marisa Kirisame -8, frontsex -17

www.outplayed.com

Base +10

Have you tried reading it yourself before uploading the "translation"?

Base +8, Palaxius +19, Shibun +10, sandyface +2, tcvds +7, Can i haz milk? +12, mojomunkeez +15, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, Lordofclits +10

There is swimwear in the baggages :D

Base +6

3 words:worst rewrite ever
at least check twice before ruining artist work with shit english <_<

Base +8, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8

First of all, if your native language isn't English, you shouldn't try to translate in it. If English IS your native language, then you need to proofread (and I mean NEED).
And to editing. First that hit's the eye is font (you have to use readable font or it's all in vain). Also I suggest you read editing manual like this one: http://main.storminheaven.org/guide/main.html and learn to typeset.
In short: Translate in native language, proofread, read manual and you'll get better. Good luck

Base +16, Shibun +10, jaylou1010 +9, mojomunkeez +15, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, letmeinn0w +7, l33tsp00g3 +7

Whoe ever translated this, I personally appreciate the gesture. But PLEASE get someone to proof read for you or something.

Base +6, Agent09 +11, Palaxius +19, Generotic +3, jaylou1010 +9, Marisa Kirisame +8, Lordofclits +10

Aoi Nagisa's work didn't deserve this.

@notsureifsrs: that made my day XD

Base +8, mojomunkeez +15, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8

I am starting to think that some of them are actually trolls and are now laughing at us about how we all got "epic" trolled. There is no other explanation about this.

Base +9, ENHfaithful +3, jaylou1010 +9, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8

we need a torrent

Base +7, bucket90 -6, Marisa Kirisame -8, FJoker -6

【Uno Makot】
我推荐这个 不知大大能翻不？

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Base +9

would have been sooo much awesome of I could actually understand and read some of it))) still the artist did a good job!

Base +8, bucket90 +6, Marisa Kirisame +8, frontsex -17

"Time to sweep" I came though, so 10/10.

Base +5