Translated by DesuDesu. [Needs more Onee-sans, less MILFs]
Commissioned by Darkfire. [Contemplating on getting a Vita]
http://desudesu0.com/

I went to a Christmas Party yesterday so sadly; I forgot to upload chapter 3. So heres' the whole damn thing. Enjoy aerial bombardment! :D

Also; If I was him, I'd pursue the harem end rather then sticking to one girl...the legal rori is good too...

And also; finally. MC not a weakass. Beat up some baddies yo!

P.S. Any typos found will be edited and re-uploaded sometime in Christmas. :3

Is it complete? Is it complete??

Holy fuck! IT IS COMPLETE!!

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Thanks for this.

PS. Get the Vita bundle, it is cheaper during holidays online. Get Persona 4 Golden. Next year, there will be Dead or Alive 5 Plus and The Legend of Heroes: Trails in the Flash.

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Has noone noticed that this is parodying love hina's opening scene perfectly?

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The Yoshino route huh?

After that, "Your cock is mine" line; I shall allow it, but just this once!

Thanks for the translation and upload :)

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great story but I will say one thing, the artist does not know how to draw assholes!

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Agreed, Legal Loli is the best.

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DesuDesu and Darkfire; I will fucking worship you like Buddha!

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Shit its like Love Hina but hotter...HOTTER THAN LOVE HINA

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still cant stop looking at that ass in page 28, like damn girl

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"I won't lose to those two!"

Yoshino, Yoshino, remember this : "It's an exhibition, not a competition."

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Who wants a sequel?

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I have to wonder, what was the authors intent in showing signs of him getting the all pregnant when there is never any mention of it later or any signs of it?

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These plot devices... They're to easy!!!! I SAY I CAN CONNECT THE DOTS!, I LOVEEEEEEE IT

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Wow impregnation 166 votes and I only count 2 actual pages of Impregnation - to introduce sperm into an ovum. A bunch of creampie sex but only 2 pages where a sperm is introduced to an ovum. So by your 'sufficient presence' rule you have 166 people that are sorely mistaken.

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Pg53, I think they're implying that Yoshino's pregnant with his kid.

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So he knocked up all of the girls or what? I'm confuse here.

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Its obvious that if you are not a pushover MC you aint getting laid coz if it was me i would have just said "hey, its you who messed up when looking for a new tenant but you are pushing the responsability to me? sis, im paying rent like you so im sleeping here, if you dont like it the door is there".

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@tearsax

In these stories you're gonna get laid no matter what you do. The universe conspires to get you laid. Quite unlike reality.

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