Finally translated.
Now we need the first part: in the first part raw comment, someone said Doujin-Moe has it in English.

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too bad TH only draw one page of Maken-ki! hentai...

it would be great (and hilarious of course) to see Takeda Hiromitsu write a full Maken-ki! doujin, especially with his infamous vanilla-turned-netorare speciality..

-edit-
after checking it, actually it's about 'My Personal Masturbation Maid' series, huh? what, Ken and TH tried to troll each other?

and his footnote totally make me laugh...
to quote : 'I think some people might be mad if I draw Aki-sensei too... so here's Yuna-sensei! Yes, it's NTR content too!'

well, although I'm sure NTR-hater would be mad if TH drew Maken-ki! netorare doujin, I'm sure TH fans would be really happy...

@cantthinkofaname : yeah, I get what you mean, but as far as I remember, almost Takeda works always involving NTR, no?
and I agree with you about Ken should stay vanilla all the way... although it's too perverted in general to be simply vanilla...

-another edit-
no he wouldn't dare...
except if you count the one where Yuu imagining his girls being used by other guys as NTR...
but really, I wouldn't mind myself if TH make an ntr doujin out of Ken series...

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they already had the first part, just in chinese though not RAW

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Awesome Thnks for Translation

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Oh, I feel good :)
Thanks for uploading

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It's a doujin of a series by Takeda Hiromitsu drawn by a dude who draws likes Takeda Hiromitsu.

Da fuck.

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hee I commissioned this :)

can anyone find a link to the japanese RAW of the first part? so that it can be translated as well.

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@ BlorgAlmighty, Your doin it wrong. It's "Dafuq?", one word spelled with a 'Q' and not a 'K', thank Shiwasu no Okina for that one.

Pardon me but Fuck the What? If that's true then I think I might have stepped into the Twilight zone...

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First part:

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whats the name of the anteater face she makes when she sucks them off?

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Is this not from the actual author?

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typo on page 10
says "the's" instead of "she's"

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