Translated by shadow_moon (SMDC)

http://smdc-translations.blogspot.com/

raw: /g/260058/b5c8cafb00

Needs another round of QC and a lesser reliance on vertical text, but otherwise a neat little doujin.

Base +12, janusi +15, Incest1234 +8, White Joker +16, Maxer123 +6

Fantastic gallery. Thanks for sharing.

Base +30, marumekomu -9, janusi -15, Incest1234 -8, Maxer123 +6

is this translation superior in any way? Font is kind of harder to read.

Base +8, Incest1234 +8, White Joker +16

@lold

The translation seems to be a little better. But the typesetting is hideous...

Base +7, Incest1234 +8, Isodif -6

I usually avoid furry. But this is pretty good even for me.

Base +4, Bigslam1993 +8

At least its a boiled mouse and not leaves or something.

Base +7

thanks for the translation

after reading both of the translations, my opinion is that this one less polished.

first is the font used.

and second is more of personal taste rather than being a bad translation.
the sentences are better written in the other, because the words you use are more rough in this one

Base +5, Isodif +6