[Sanagi Torajirou] Sun to Witch - Ch.02

I'm in the process of learning Japanese, and so decided to translate this as practice. First time I've done such a thing so comments and feedback on all aspects are more than welcome!

Thanks to pop9 for Japanese version: /g/571985/3f8add6a87/

and to =Hentai-kun= for their excellent work on Ch.01: /g/575724/4fd98adb15/

Finally, Thank You so much. Great work!!!

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I can't state my gratitude enough. This is a series I've been champing at the bit for since =Hentai-kun= released the first chapter, and it's fantastic that we've got a little further in it. Love Sanagi's art, as always.
And great job on your first translation! Obviously I can't speak for the accuracy (my Japanese is close to non-existant!), but the English is functional and well-written. I would recommend choosing a different font, next time. At the e-hentai forums there's a thread about selecting the right font for your translations, but the scanlation standard is this one called Anime Ace.
Well done and thanks a lot!

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18 pictures-42Mb
Are you serious?And the pictures are not even high resolution.Have you used Paint for editing?

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didnt notice any glaring grammer issues so i say you did a damn fine job

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whoh this took longer to come out , good to see it wasn't forgotten

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Great work, OP. Keep practicing.

@ Guestoid
Right, OP should use other font.

@ Biladsan
OP, you use the wrong image format.PNG is for pictures with few colors.
JPG should do the trick to minimize the size.

I hope someone will fix it, when the manga is complete

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@Biladsan - I used GIMP, I'm just a tit and saved them as .png instead of jpg. Will be an easy fix when I get round to it.
@Guestoid - Thank you for the font advice, will check that out for next time I work on something (soon, I hope!)

Everyone else - thank you for your patience and kind words :)

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Very good work, translation-wise I didn't notice any problems, editing was also good, nice font chosen.

The only issue, as Biladsan noted, is that the files are unnecessarily large, try using lossy compression for png next time.

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wow thanks for translating this one, well done
hope you will translate the rest of the tank as well :D

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Please fix the size to +/- the raw size per pages.

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well then, I thought he would have dropped it a lot sooner... or at least when his clothes were still off

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Just save it as a grayscale png and not colored! Going to jpg... If possible, never do that!

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Valkyrie, what exactly are you doing to study Japanese?

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