feel like i'm reading google translation

but then again, ask someone to proofread if you are not native to english!
(thanks tho)

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You need an editor and proofreader. The translated sentences feel weird to native English speaker.

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Agreed. You should have had this proofread. The grammar makes it painful to read.

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The English translation is very awkward.

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Thanks for comment. Next time I'll ask someone to edit.

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It's to bad because the art is nice, but man, what poor translation.

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Thank you. Some errors, but at least we get a translation.
Improve yourself and it'll be ok. Don't be like... well ya know.

Edit: since the last Laruffi translation turn into war, I'm just saying thing here to translator
If someone have translated (if you can call it translation) it doesn't mean you don't have to translate it. It'll be, however, better since you'll get us a proper translation!

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sorry for the bad english, where were you when you where sexed?
i was at page 13 and the librarari girl said
"lets sex"
"no"

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lol nice grammar plz trans moer

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I agree with most of the comments. Translation is appreciated, but it felt very awkward to read. Someone who is a native English speaker should edit your future releases.

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Perfect sense make this! Bizarro think art poor, but words are moving and eloquent for a hentai

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Duwang, is that you? I thought that by the end of part 4 you had at least decent grammar.

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I like how a first time translator is encouraged to improve his/her translations in this community. It's only when they release a half dozen with absolutely no sign of improvement that people start to hate on them and such.

Please improve your translations and we will continue to try to encourage you.

Here are a couple of things I'll point out, though I won't go through every page.
"I lend this" should probably be "I would like to borrow this" instead.
"Your face is red. I wonder if poor physical condition?" is awkward. Try more for something like "Your face is red. Are you sick?"
"Then the semen continues being squeezed every day" and "Incidentally such pathetic there is no won emperor..." are both extremely awkward sentences. While the first could be fixed relatively easily by a native speaker of English (something like "After that, she drained me of my semen every day" maybe?), the second one doesn't make much sense at all.

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please redo this when you've got a good editor. it felt like a google/bing translate machine.

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I'm gonna try and make a better edit since this one is terribly translated as well as edited. Should have it finished in a few days.

Base +6, smillz999 +7, Rayquazaxza +7

This is the Grammar Nazis' paradise.

Base +10, oneforce -9, Rayquazaxza +7, malikski +2, Hyoros -6, yomoto47 +6

Uhm.
Almost as bad ad Laruffii or CGRascal.
I hope at least you will become better, because we have enough shitty translators.

Base +6, Rayquazaxza +7, Hyoros -6

"Let's sex."

For a librarian, she sucks at speaking.

Base +5, Hyoros -6, yomoto47 +6

It's pretty ironic that... having sex within the library... while their english is.... this... terrible...
But 9/10 For Tiddies...

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The translation kind of ruins it for me.

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