Twilight reads an interesting book

Your art looks pretty awkward, maybe you should try drawing from life to get better at consistency and proportions.

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@Inuyuru...

Agreed with generickitty. Premise-wise you have a solid vanilla-sex basis, just need to improve your art-quality.

My artistic advice is to keep at it, doing more works, then come back and do a version #2 of this at a later date to show how you have improved since then.

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@Inuyuru
And don't forget the important part: Keep your own style of drawin', mate. Make something that says you!

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