Way too fucking good not to TL. No real fetish stuff here (not seeing a dick on Saika = no trap), but it was
almost perfect for a Yahari doujin. I love the series and I couldn't not TL this.

Sorry the title doesn't mention Yahari. I couldn't fit it in there without cutting off the "English" label, which I'm sure more people would want to see.

Happy fapping (or just reading this time)!

RAW - /g/619764/61a5fbe32f/

This is amazing, thanks for translating this

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Ya gotta keep checking ya PMs. :V

Some speedy QC:
For things like #5, panel 2, the "misguided and", move it a bit to the right. (Right Sidebar -> Paragraph)

Generally try to keep a certain amount of room between bubble edge and text. Like on #6, panel 1, first bubble, the "totally" and "unfair" (haz good distance).
Even if you have to change the font size individually for that, doesn't matter.

Filling out the background like on #10 is generally a bad thing. Gotta redraw that.
But between this and ruining the art, it's actually a pretty good solution.

Also, text with backgrounds, like on #15, panel 2, need a stroke. (Layer -> Layer Style -> Stroke)
Same with text where the bubbles are too small to fit.

For things like #20, second bubble: One way to handle it, when you don't know how to redraw that, would be by cleaning it first, then make the text reaaaaally big (so it covers most blank spots).

Other things would be, different fonts for dialogues and moans and some warping here and there (right Click on Text -> Warp Text).
But those are mostly style choices and not -absolutely- necessary.

Huge improvement from before. Keep it up.

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Totsuka Saika best man... I mean girl.

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Hikki is a genius.

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As much as I enjoy /h/ doujins of "My RomCom SNAFU," I'd love some more 8-Man+Totskawer (crossdressing) yaoi.

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Pages 21 and up didn't go on long enough :( (realy cute though~)

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Sensei #1.

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Now this has everything I could ever ask for in a yahari doujin. Thanks for the translation!

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Need moar pages!!! mu..st... hav...e...MORE!!!

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Nice but damn wanted him doing the blonde girl and yukino's sister

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>Totsuka

>wearing stockings

please someone call a metallurgist because my dick is harder than a diamond

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Why can't all fucking harems end like this?

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Saika saika saikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i cuming!!1 lolll

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an Amazing Heaven!!!
Bi Harem are the BEST!!!
Good Job with the traslations!!! Thanks!!

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https://www.doujinshi.org/book/614957/Houshi-bu-no-Seiteki-na-Katsudou/
RAW: /g/619764/61a5fbe32f/
Russian Translation: /g/634757/cf1bb60b50/
Korean Translation: /g/623728/257f03f024/
Chinese Translation: /g/1216125/c814f60a2d/

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