Edited by Conan (4dawgz.blogspot.com)

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Alternate English translation by Fateburn Family.

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Nice, something that had effort put into it

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leave it to raku to piss chitoge off by falling asleep on her lol

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Goddamn, this is beautiful.

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This fidelity to the characters... it's... it's so beautiful T.T

Also on a related note... -clears throat-

THIS IS NOW CANON!
ALL OF YOUR ARGUMENTS TO THE CONTRARY ARE NOW INVALID!

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Great work, loved it. Chitoge was so cute, and the characters were kept very true to the manga. Lol Onodera the rapist.

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MASTERPIECE

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The doujin itself was pretty good, artwork was nice and the progression was solid.

Only problem was how out of character Onodera was. It's very unrealistic to the source that she would stay to rape Ichijou in his sleep.
Other than that, this was a good read. Pretty funny with the sleeping parts as well.

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Onodera is obviously the best.

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For a reason, I want it to have continuation

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She accidentally had sex with him? I guess it's kind of normal.

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