This would be very good, if it has a longer story. Overall, it color and picture is very well done. So thank you very much SMDC translation.
Base +14, Capi duffman +9, Palaxius +22
Posted on 02 January 2014, 22:27 UTC by: Shitsuji-kun
Score +64
The script probably would have benefited from having another pair of eyes look over it. There are a few instances where the language felt jumbled and awkward:
>It would be better that I didn't came... -> It would've been better if I didn't come... >You want to have sex with, right? -> You want to have sex with me, right?