Translated and edited by Twilight Sparkle1998 after accepting my bounty. Already got a bounty up for the third one if you want it out faster add to it

I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but I really wish the scans are much more higher quality than this, considering one of the raws available is very much of HQ after all. Such a waste of fapping potential don't you think.

Also, the editing leave much to be desired imo, translator should have find someone else competent enough to do the job. Page 2(/s/ac7fd51214/538213-2) for instance got replaced by a new blank page instead of properly typesetted.

Thanks for putting up the bounties for this series anyway. Horie's Tsukuyo is just so fucking hot, I could have my way with her all night long. :D

@Buffalo01

Hmm, perhaps higher quality is not the right word. What I meant is that Twilight could have make the scans bigger, downscale them to a more satisfactorily resolution. I'm assuming you used kerker's second scans.

@Twilight

I was referring to /g/538213/fbaf5718ef/. Isn't that HQ enough?

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looks like this was edited in Paint or something. I'm so tempted to re-edit this properly ...

@TwilightSparkle

get photoshop. Download the font "wild words". "Wild Words" is the usual standard font for scanlating. Photoshop + font is all you need for good editing. For pg 2, you can use the clone tool or the content-aware fill tool.

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If you want to re-edit it feel free just credit the guy for the translation. And if you know of a better scan then please point it out because we looked over all 4 of the versions available on the galleries and none of them were all that great(The digital version was incomplete)

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Sure you can re-edit it, I am not good with editing, in fact, the only thing I could do would pretty much be replacing Chinese words with English. Sorry for Page 2, but since the words covered the background and deleting would pretty much mean replacing all the images. I can redo page 2 if you all want me to. Actually, the one I used already was edited by Paint, so it does look like it.

@mlkio

Okay, I will keep that editing skill in mind for any other editing, probably in the third one maybe. I am not editing Page 2 anymore if that's fine by you. And since the third one has no Chinese translation of page 2, I can't do that page, but all the same, thnx for the advice and hope you enjoy the doujin.

@DirtyHairry

Well, too late for that, unfortunately.

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I'd like to comment on the actual porn material, since while reading I had no issues whatsoever.

Anyway, so few hentai artists choose to invest in the longer mind breaking processes which is a shame since they feel more like serious works of inspiration and the feeling of finally reaching the breaking point is tangibly higher. It doesn't feel like another "Well I saw this coming" moment because at that point I'm already a way into the training program. This is what makes this series perfect, and many similar to it. Plus it's a blackmail, hurrah

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