What the fuck is this? You mangled the original comic with a shit crop job and put horrible translations all over the pictures as well.

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This is probably the most retardet thing on this site.

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Uh, could you not do this? Like, ever again?

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Okay. I'm not quite sure what you're attempting to do here, but the limited use of color and way you've cropped things suggests you're trying to do something art-y. Assuming you're not a troll, here's some unsolicited advice:

1) This website is not the place to start out doing this sort of thing. Ehentai's audience is mostly comprised of, uh, people not looking for what you're doing. Try deviantart or a small fan forum somewhere. The experience should be much more pleasant and helpful for you.

2) Don't use paint as an image editor. Try Paint.NET, GIMP, or InkScape.

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It's not a final fantasy X parody, it's a final fantasy X-2 parody. In X, there are no such things as spheres to change clothing which affect people's skills and the like - that's a X-2 mechanic.

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Obama needs to put in place a government program where a drone is immediately dispatched to anyone who presses "post gallery" on a rewrite.

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What a way to shit all over the original work.

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The fact you stole someone's work. Something that took them an unfathomable amount of time to accomplish and turned it into this incomprehensible mess you call an original story.
You might as well of wiped your ass with the original and posted it here.

Seek some help, dude, because there's something wrong with you. Because you're too old to be doing childish, illiterate, demented looking edits like this.

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