8th Translation. Urakaze's best feature is her hat

And her breasts.

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p .4: One of the speech bubbles still has the original dialogue beneath the translation.
p: 21: "That's!! It only because of Urakaze!" - 'It's'

And, overall, while a decent work, the speech bubble could really use some cleaning. I can still see even a bit of smudge (for lack of a better word) in between the text.

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http://i.imgur.com/aG1cbpP.png

I love these redraws, very reminiscent of a famous scanlator, I forget his name, starts with "CG" or something like that

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>wavedash

Was it CGScamp? No wait... CGScoundrel? Darn it, if only I could remember that rascal's name.

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the comments amused me more than the actual doujinshi

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Don't you guys mean...
(Cough)
CGrascal

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Sadistic nymphomaniac Urakaze? Sign me up!

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