Another Laruffi fix. This time Ranzu managed to completely realign and properly translate purposely mistranslated lines of dialog.

/g/714941/df990492bc/

The difference is VERY clear.

I personally felt it was a crime from Laruffi to ruin a Rio Yanagawa work let along a oneshot. The Fujoshi Queen of shotacon and Female supremacy doesn't deserve to have her devoted works mistranslate her work.

Sorry about the watermark on Pg 2. Ranzu worked extremely hard redrawing to erase them. I guess he missed that one.

People are finally fighting against Laruffi and his abominations. There is really a God in this world.

GJ to you guys. Now then I can finally enjoy reading this.

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Bless you Ranzu

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Love dat face of her sucking on the noodles on page 4 :D

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thank you for fighting the good fight against Laruffi's abominations.

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Thank you for correcting the blight on Yanagawa Rio's fine artwork. Laruffi and his ilk need to be banned unless they first submit their translation to a well-known Quality Checker; e.g., Afro Thunda.

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Thanks JackMorrison & Ranzu. But the 1st page of this 18 page manga tale, is still missing. (aka: page 081 of Momoko-san no Nama Shitagi) Any chance of a translation please........

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@JackMorrison. there's no watermark on the tank version. i even removed the Japanese text for you.

link: http://www.imagesocket.com/photos/guest/2829217

2Hip

Last edited on 23 August 2015, 04:30 UTC.

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Thank you so much everyone for your greatfulness.

@Zippy8K. Thanks. We're going to do that Rinko Gundam doujin next.

@Oryx your welcome. :) We want Laruffi to go away and never return.

@Zagafon. Rio Yanagawa is a fine and wonderful Female manga-ka. To have unprofessional translators like Laruffi ruin her beautiful hard work is a Felony.

@2Hip. Yes I'm aware of that. Unfortunately, the page was damaged severely by Laruffi watermarks, Ranzu had no choice but to delete it.

I've got a professionally translated Ohigatan oneshot on the way and another Izayoi No Kiki coming.

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Why work hard to redraw watermarks for page 2? Copying and paste over from the raw gallery is way easier.
Here's page 2 de-watermarked (http://imgbox.com/oOdUZBXJ) , it was a matter of literally 30 seconds. Took longer to find a site for hosting it...
As for page 1, more than it being tainted by watermarks it seems that Laruffi didn't even bother to translate it. At least, that page isn't present in your linked gallery.

[Edit 23:40 UTC] Sorry the tone in my comment made me sound ungrateful. Don't be mistaken, I'm all for people fixing bad translations or botched edits and wish there were more of them. I was just pointing out a way to save you time while doing it. It never occurred to me to check your mod power to ensure you could see the raw gallery (/g/712391/a1c54acf9d/), my bad.

Last edited on 22 August 2015, 23:41 UTC.

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@JukanX, Ranzu & I couldn't find or locate the original tank or RAW source for him to redraw. Sorry about that. Yeah, the first page was ruined pretty badly by watermarks and sloppy scan quality.

You should be grateful someone is even bothering to fix Laruffi's handiwork. It isn't fair for everyone to just be stuck with his incoherent shit. And nobody is going to bother wasting time & resources redoing everything all over again.

Last edited on 23 August 2015, 02:48 UTC.

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@JackMorrison pertaining to your comment about raws, I might have a solution. A solution that often makes me want to pull my hair out due to the loading time, but a solution nonetheless. Pm me if interested.

EDIT: ignore that

@JukanX what's this about mod power seeing galleries? Because I'm lower that JackMorrison and I can see it clearly in a search.

@JackMorrison sincere question: do you go to E - X- hentai (no spaces, no dashes, and no caps) or are you on the regular site?

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@AntiShino. Yes, I post occasionally on the forums. I'm looking for freelance translators.

@JukanX, no hard feelings, man. Thanks for the advice.

Last edited on 23 August 2015, 08:56 UTC.

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In case anyone is interested... here is a fixed page 3 (02_pg_083):
http://imgur.com/9aTLfay

Not perfect, but at least, less shitty.

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still missing the first page of the story

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what a slut but why do I care it's Hentai and I fapped to it kek

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